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Looking for HONEST feedback on a short monologue !
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I am looking for HONEST feedback on a rough draft short monologue I am considering performing for a school production. I hardly ever get critical feedback on my writing which has discouraged me from writing since I really don't know where I stand/where to improve.

Title: I wrote you a letter

Genre: monologue on emotional abusive relationships

Word count: ~650 words

Type of feedback desired: brutally honest overall impressions on writing style, content, how well I am getting my message across

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MPVR2MgKTgCPpoUQAHYQwB8B7_Ibtqs56F9-XkHaSf4/edit?usp=sharing

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