TW: sexual content.

I am looking for feedback on what I just wrote about a person I was hooking up with. Let me know what you think, as I'd like to know if it makes sense, if I'm on the right track, etc.

What you said

Was a lie aimed to get me into bed

Congratulations,

My feelings for you will be dead

I'm killing them tonight

There's no more fight

You'll never be back in my bed

So, pack your bags and get the fuck out of my head

You used me, abused me, and bruised me

Which would be fine

If you were mine, even for a night

You led me on

You let me down

I just wanted to love you

Now you've got me looking like a clown

Good luck finding someone who cares like I do

Who accepts you like I do

I have nothing left to mourn for

It was sex, nothing more

Never wanted to hangout,

Unless it was for a bout