https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-1SAhXg80qM46FbOlSaBM8dfRPi2z6qlTz2IhoZ7hLw/edit

These are the first two chapters in the standalone sequel to my chapter book series. The first was a Christmas story, whereas this one takes the main character away from Santa and out of the North Pole to a tropical world full of pirates, witches, monsters, and curses.

The writing is not fully edited as this is still a work in progress. Just hoping for a bit of feedback on the opening chapter, as well as the “reintroduction” to our main character.

I do realize I use some words over and over again. I will definitely tighten things up a bit. And there’s one paragraph I know needs reworking in the second chapter, but I’ll deal with that later.

Thanks.