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I’m writing a comedic novel of British manners - kinda like Downton Abbey but with more clowns. I’m poking fun at the upper classes and the Roundheads.
Anyway, my lame editor keeps telling me I use the word “expeditious” too much but I don’t believe that’s possible. Here’s the opening scene - you tell me if he’s right or not:
“Angus Piggot was a stout, melancholy-looking man who had the expeditious appearance of mashed potatoes with too much gravy. He spoke always with meticulous expedition, expeditiously twirling his burnished moustache with impish and vexatious intent. ‘I say, good sir!’ He said, with expeditious volume, ‘I do love a good parlay with gentlemen of leisure! I say!’ His tone was full of expedition, not unlike the vocal timbre of his expeditious cousin Nigel.”
Here's a sample of my writing before and after editing
"His cock was big and could unload literal truckloads of cum in one ejaculation"
"The man's cock stretched to 7 feet in length, he leaned forward on it to rest his legs after a extreme 700 lbs sumo squat. He could ejaculate through willpower alone. Not wanting to walk back to his house from the gym, he blasted off, a tun of cum leaving his rock hard rocket cock and thrusting him into the air. Using his massive nuts as a parachute he made a graceful landing on the balcony of his 69 bedroom mansion."
Just use chat gpt bruh, it's the superior editor
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Sorry I misspelled his name, Chad Got Pussy Toomuch. He's my editor and he always makes my stuff super sexy