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[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing
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Your critique submission should be a top-level comment in the thread and should include:

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*Genre

*Word count

*Type of feedback desired (line-by-line edits, general impression, etc.)

*A link to the writing

Anyone who wants to critique the story should respond to the original writing comment. The post is set to contest mode, so the stories will appear in a random order, and child comments will only be seen by people who want to check them.

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For anyone using Google Drive for critique: Drive is one of the easiest ways to share and comment on work, but keep in mind all activity is tied to your Google account and may reveal personal information such as your full name. If you plan to use Google Drive as your critique platform, consider creating a separate account solely for sharing writing that does not have any connections to your real-life identity.

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Be reasonable with expectations. Posting a short chapter or a quick excerpt will get you many more responses than posting a full work. Everyone's stamina varies, but generally speaking the more you keep it under 5,000 words the better off you'll be.

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Title: Cheese Tower (Prologue & Chapter 1)

Genre: Sci-fi/Humor

Word Count: 753 (out of 16,732)

Feedback desired: general impression & what kind of tone story has, how any of it can be improved

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