I know I got alot of negetive reactions from the last post but I'm still gonna make the story because it's about male loneliness and the social pressure to lose your virginity for alot of young men. This story is made to connect and help them get better.

There is also no rape in the story, stop saying there's rape. The queen gives them consent.

It's about how each knight views sex and why they need it and how they react when they don't get it. Each represents a different emotion/reaction. How some accept it vs the ones that become distressed that they failed.

Many of the beast/items also represents different things

The book can be split into 3 parts, going to save the queen, after they save the queen and when they return home.

The first 2 parts are the most imporant, because we get to see the young men at their most emotional state.

They view losing their virginity as something that's the most imporant, it's the ultimate act of connection, a spiritual moment, it's so powerful you could create life with it if you wanted too.

It's a passing of your former self, into a new one. Your eyes become open, and you become oneness with your partner for a brief time. It's the ultimate goal that these young men want. Yet only 1 person gets to be lose it with the queen (who consents) and the rest have a unique reaction to that.

When they get to the wizards castle, and almost defeat the wizard, he cast a spell and turns into smoke before the finale blow. They also find alot of items in his castle.

Knight A finds the fruit of eden and takes a bite of it, opening his eyes to the past and present connecting him to earth, his eyes start to glow

Knight B loses his virginity to the queen.

The knights that survive the journey all go home togther, some of them ask Knight A what it was like and Knight A doesn't answer, he says they have to find out for themselves.

One of the knights, let's call him knight C is very sad. He complains about not losing his virginity, that he was so close and it's unfair that he made this journey to lose it and doesn't get it, yet knight B gets too. He starts complaining and crying.

Later on, in the morning knight C is by a lake still complaining, when he makes a deal with the devil to lose it and in return he has to bring the devil something.

The knights also starts to view the queen more like just a person when they get to know her more.

One if the knight goes crazy over the fear of going home without losing his virginity and the others has to put him down for attacking them.

They start to bond more after the crazy knight dies, that they need to work togther more.

Knight C, the one who made a deal with the devil also dies because the devil gives him a mermaid to lose his virginity too and if you know the mythology of mermaids, they drown their victims.

This story is about the social issues of today and putting that in a timeless story with many metaphors and creatures that represent different things.

Edit: these are not my views, they are views from people online that I put as characters.

Edit 2: when the knight goes into the Queens room, she's is the one who starts the sex. So it's not rape, stop saying it's rape. He does not force himself on her, it's her that forces herself on him.