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Im working on a book what do you guys think of it?
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Rueben walked outside with his bow to go hunting for dinner. he walks about 20-30 minutes before he see a deer. he crouchs down and takes aim, then the deer turns around and all he sees is exposed flesh on the deers face he recoils as it looks in his direction, They both pause, as he's looking at this deer he sees pappery skin flaking away he definitely wants nothing to do with this creature it's definitely not a deer. so he turns around, then he hears it running towards him, braking branches under it's weight it nocks over a tree as it runs into it he barley makes it to his door before the creature slams into it as he scrambles under the bed the door gives way. A moment of silence passed before he hears the creaking from the stairs to the cellar he hears it knock something over and the creature talking in a soft voice that sounds like a child saying "come out and play". He is frozen in his hiding space when he hears a gasp at the door he got out from under my bed to see his best friend. Kelby who's standing outside staring at rueben in shock about to ask what happened when rue holds his finger to his lips Kelby nods as rue creaps out to him creaking boards under his feet as he curses his old house for being so noisy they run once past the door. Kelby and rue run the fastest that they've ever run rue felt out of breath as he looks behind him to see a human like creature staring at them as they run then they hear it say "come hear son, we can play a game". They don't stop until they're near the Bexley tunnels they hear it again The creature says "love, come here" in a sickly sweet voice rue and kelby slide down the steep fall to the tunnels they run in hearing the creature say "please don't go, we've only just started". Once in the entrance to the tunnels they don't hesitate, they run, the more they run the closer it feels and sounds rue feels something touch his back and he falls feeling a abandoned weapon on the floor he grabs it and spins around to feel teeth on his shoulder. The spear has gone right through it's heart, ...I'm alive is all rue thinks as he slips the teeth out of his bloodied shoulder and slides out from under the creature pieces of papery skin coming with him falling onto the floor as he stands. He looks to kelby who's staring at rue now the real challenge has started they're in the Bexley tunnels.

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