It's a dystopian psychological-thriller and I would love some honest feedback. Also, I need help coming up with a new title because the title of another famous short story and I didn't out until today.

Blurb:
Today is the launch of Fibr 6, the latest and greatest iteration of the A.I. Operating System living in everyone's head since birth.

"What's so special about my latest and greatest version...of myself? Well, besides the long list of security updates that you most definitely need, I'll be joined by a by a new friend named Weev. Who is Weev? Well, he's here to bridge the gap between myself and your mind. Think of Weev as your sub-concious, but better.

Weev can read your thoughts directly and know what you want before you even realise it. No more outdated manual navigation, Weev has that taken care of. With us working together, our new name is Fibrweev, and we've got your mind covered.

So, do you consent?"