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Sample of my next story “Zachary T, my first love” and me asking for edit help!
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Hey there, I started writing my stories again. Kinda going out of order here but this one is on my mind. If you would be willing to edit my stories please let me know. I always give a nude to people who help edit. Sample below ———————————————————— Then the door to his hotel room closed, I knew what I needed to do. He seemed hesitant to say anything, but his eyes looked consumed with lust. I placed my hands on his waist and got to my knees. “Let me take care of you” I started to undo his belt, looking up at him with a smile. Then i pulled his pants down. “You’ll love this” and with that his boxers came down. He was already erect, his cock was average in thickness, but slightly under 8 inches long. It curved slightly up, and I begin to stroke it. “Zach, your cock is so big” he seemed to be over his hesitation now. “Be a good girl Sarah and suck my dick. “ I knew she never did this for him, so I set out to make it amazing for him. I began to lick his shaft then dove right in. Taking almost all of him in one go. My hands moved to the back of his legs for support. I made sure to keep my eyes up looking at him, towering above me. He was obsessed with blow job eyes, and I was putting on a performance for him. I moved on and off his cock as quickly as I could. Allowing my tongue to flick and move along the side. Then I grabbed onto his legs firmly and impaled his cock down my throat. I took all of him to the back of my throat and he let out an audible moan as I held him there. “Fuck sarah, you’re such a slut” At this point my already wet pussy, became soaked. I kept going for a little longer moving up and down on his big cock. Keeping eyes open and staring up at him. He seemed to be in bliss just moaning with his eyes closed, and one hand placed in my head. But I wanted more than this, and I needed him to get more than a quick bj. I did not have a feeling he could last long, so I pulled off then stood up. I pulled him close and kissed him, the feeling of his lips was heavenly even if his kissing skills were average. I started to stroke his cock and whispered into his ear. “Fuck me, fuck me and use me , I belong to you”

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