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WARNING: Horror and very dark themes ahead
The sound of rusty wheels on a cart echoed against the blank white walls of the hall way. The nurse pushing the cart hummed a tune as she passed each metal door. With each pass, the faint sound of arguing could be heard from each cell. She paid it no mind however as she reached her destination.
With a nod, the guard standing by the cell door opened it revealing what appeared to be a young woman laying on her back on the floor. Her hair was a mess and her clothes were better described as rags. The expression on her face was blank as she stared up at the ceiling almost lifeless. Every so often a limb would twitch but that was about the range of motion to be expected.
The nurse looked the girl up and down simply to make sure she was still breathing. When it was confirmed that she was alive, the nurse pulled out her clip board and flipped to the page corresponding to the girl's cell number. On that page was a list of nine names belonging to different women. With a click of her pen, she added one more.
After putting the clipboard away, she reached into the cart and withdrew a canister about the size of a thermos but was made of glass and contained an almost electric like substance that glowed blue. Crudely written on the side was the same name she had just written on the paper. "Number 10 eh? You sure are getting full." The nurse said as she approached the dazed girl. "Say hello to your new roommate."
Once the container opened, the energy quickly spilled out and flew straight to the girl on the floor. The light absorbed into the body seamlessly. The girl suddenly jolted as she proceeded to have a full body spasm. Ten voices worth of screams escaped her mouth as she tossed around flailing her limbs hard.
Without giving a second glance to the girl in pain, the nurse stepped out of the cell and the guard closed the door behind her. She sighed and looked at her cart. Placed inside among other things were two more canisters of the same blue light. Each had a different name written along the side. "That about does it for that body..." She noted to herself. "I'll find you two a fresh home next."
Hey! I'm looking for a partner for a story focused roleplay. I love a good amount of detail, length (multi-paragraph) and writes in third person. Please let me know your favorite color in your first message.
The above was just a sample of an idea I'd like to write about with my partner. The basic premise is that in a dystopian future, prisons became so overcrowded that governments looked to alternative ways to contain criminals. Using technology, prisons began growing "host bodies" to act as the new prison cell. These host bodies are mindless and can not function on their own without a mind.
Criminals would have their minds/consciousness removed and stored in containers which would then be moved to the host bodies. The host body can house several minds at once but the toll it takes on the minds of the occupants is incredibly rough. A near constant struggle for control among the minds would drive anyone insane.
We'll be playing as two new inmates being placed into a brand new host body. We can get as creative as we want with who we are, why we're here and the general setting. Everything written here is just an idea and is free to be changed up or added to.
I'm hoping to world build with my partner as much as possible and get lost in this dystopian story. The major themes would be horror, psychological thriller, dark comedy and other related genres.
Hope to hear from you soon! Ladies only, PMs only, 21 years only, discord preferred for RP.
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