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Demo Script:
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Step 1: The Context or What is happening / What led up to the events of the script.
Context: Itās your anniversary tonight and all you wanted was for your husband to show up. A brilliant but forgetful scientist, youāre prepared for another lonely night butā¦ it seems heās prepared a surprise.
Step 2: Setting or A general idea of where this is taking place
Setting: Home
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Tags:[M4F][Established Relationship][Forgetful Scientist Husband][Annoyed Wife Listener][Forgotten Anniversary][Or Is It?][Android][Reveal][Sad]to[Wholesome][Nerd Himbo Energy][CW: Forgotten Anniversary]
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[Scene opens at home]
[SFX: Pots and pans banging out]
[You sit at the dining room table while your husband scurries about, absolutely out of his mind]
āDo not fret, my beauty! I did not forget! I simply got caught up on my asteroid observations and lost track of time!ā
[Pauseā¦]
[He laughs from the kitchen]
āYou thought I wasnāt going to show up? For our fifth anniversary?? Darling! Iām offended that you think Iād be so careless and uncar-!ā
[SFX: A very, very small explosion]
[You jump up from the table and hurry into the kitchen, frantic. Your husband sits on the ground, examining his arm whichā¦ is missing a lot of skinā¦]
[Pause!!!]
āIām fine! Iām fine, love! Just a bit of a mishap with the oven!ā
[. . .]
[SFX: Some minor sparks flying]
āMy armā¦? Ohā¦ā
[He looks down at his now skinless arm as sparks fly from it, completely unimpacted]
āOh, the dermal covering got torn offā¦ Whoops, sorry about that. Here, let me fix it real fast-ā.
[...Pauseā¦?]
[He pauses, looking at you with innocent eyes]
āAm I an android? Yesā¦ Dr. Anderson could not make this appointment, so he sent a replica of himself in his place. Iām the exact same, really, I just donāt have biological functions and he seems to have set my āaffection meterā a bit highā¦ But, otherwise, I am your husband, still.ā
[He says it sweetly. Matter-of-factly, even, but his smile immediately vanishes as you put your face in your hands and break down sobbing]
[. . .]
ā...I donāt understandā¦ Why are you crying? Your distress isā¦ making me distressedā¦ā
[Pauseā¦]
ā... It hurts you that heād rather send down an android than spend time with you himselfā¦ But he is! Weāre similarly linked, and I can report data to him!ā
[SFX: The Listener standing]
āW-Wait, where are you going??ā
[Pauseā¦]
āA hotelā¦? Thatā¦ indicates you wish to leave him. Me. Us.ā
[...Pauseā¦]
āIām listening! Iām always listening, I promise!ā
[. . .]
[This android of your husband reminds you of a younger version of him. Forgetful, manic, but always skidding to a halt when he saw you, always looking at you with respect and admirationā¦ That man is hiding in his lab, at present, best you can tell]
[Pauseā¦]
ā...But Iām not another manā¦ So you wouldnāt be cheatingā¦? You could make love to ten of me at once if you wanted!ā
[P-Pause]
[He remains innocent, very matter-of-fact]
āNo, I donāt know what one would do with that much male genitalia simultaneously either, but Iām sure we could figure it outā¦ I know youāve been starved for touch andā¦ you believed in my touch until I short-circuitedā¦ā
[...]
āYou know, without a doubt, that I, as an individual, love you. Youāve seen that tonightā¦ so, perhaps, even if Dr. Anderson himself is a bad husbandā¦ Youāll let me be a good one to you?ā
[. . .]
[Since when was he a good negotiatorā¦?]
āI have literally all the time in the world for you! I can take you anywhere, buy you anything, all you have to do is ask! But thereās this sensation of pressure in my chest telling me the world will end if I lose you, and I donāt know if itās programming or just because I love you that much. You can be mad at the human version of me while being spoiled by one of my variants!ā ā
[...Pause?]
āWhat am I doing? Grovelingā¦ā
[Godamn him for being so cute]
[Pause?]
āBecause I know you like itā¦ And you need to see that I want you badly enough to fight for us, even if Iām not the creatorā¦ā
[He looks conflicted for a moment before forcing out:]
āIāmā¦ Model 14. I am always to call myself Soren, butā¦ if you say āfourteenā, I will respond, no matter what lockdowns he has on me.ā
[...Pause]
[You greet him properly, as his own entity at least, and shake his hand. He reciprocates it, stands, and kisses you hard enough that your leg nearly pops on its own]
āIt is nice to meet you, tooā¦ and passionately kiss youā¦ā
[SFX: A heart pounding]
ā...We can go out on the town, right now. You can wear whatever you want, even if you want to make other men jealous. I am secure in our relationship.ā
[Pause? <3]
[He laughs. Or, tries to. It comes out as more of a hum than a normal laugh]
āIn our relationship that just started tonight? Thatās not very fairā¦ Weāve been married for some time now, my devious darling. I just, you knowā¦ skip around different bodies, at times. Some of them just happen to have very interesting perksā¦ā
[. . . ?]
āThe light showā¦?ā
[He pauses for a moment then smiles]
āIf you let me fly you there, we can make the City of Lights tour. I can have a hotel booked with five-star food, a private hot tub, and everything.ā
[Pause???]
[He laughs]
āYes, I can go in waterā¦ Itād be super inconvenient if it rained, you know?ā
[Pauseā¦]
ā...I know youāre mad at himā¦ but will you give me a chance to make it up to you, at least? It doesnāt have to be on his behalfā¦ Iām just sad youāre having such a lonely anniversaryā¦ You do so much for usā¦ā
[. . .]
[Why not? You may as well]
[He hops up with an excited smile]
āI am delighted to accompany you! And to be your very, very small plane for the evening. Please note that I do not come with seatbelts as I am not cleared to fly in air space for more than a few minutes. Fortunately for us both, I am VERY fast!ā
[Pause?]
[He scoops you up into his arms. Itāsā¦ odd feeling your husband have defined muscles]
āErmā¦ No, I do not believe we have received a citation. Y-Yet. BUT we are being very respectful of the law to minimize any second-hand embarrassment for you. It is in the wife patch notes from May.ā
[Pause <3]
[Heās a doofusā¦ Very in character]
āLet us away, fair lady! To a show of lights, a nice dinner, and then an evening of shopping for the most beautiful woman in the world!ā
[SFX: Fade out on them taking off into the night]
[To be continued]
This has been a demo script that might turn into a demo series for the sake of writing exercises. For now, please treat it as a loose guideline.
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