FYI, this is the first story I've ever written Part 1 can be found here:

https://www.reddit.com/r/literotica/s/ydnnF83nhC

Part 2

https://www.reddit.com/r/literotica/s/FKwalvxFYd

I would love feedback as I am looking at continuing my writing. Also, If anyone knows of any authors of a similar writing style to this erotica please post a link.

P.S. I'm writing all of this as an anonymous fictional erotica to share with my wife. Ladies please let me know how I can improve the story's feminine appeal.

Day 3

I was woken the next day to Emily climbing on top of me. I started stretching as she sat on top of me and pulled off her nightgown, exposing her lovely little chest. “Well hi there beautiful. I guess you are in a perky mood today.” I yawned as she laid down on top of me. “Ben, I am ready. I want to be with Dave tonight ” She said, staring at me with a loving expression “Are you sure? Should we slow down first?” I replied, surprised at how eager she seemed. “After watching you and Dave pleasure Alice, I want a turn with Dave” Alice repeated her request. “Do you want Dave and me? Like Alice got last night?” “I'm not ready for that much extra attention. You can still enjoy Alice, but I want to have just Dave. If you are ok watching me with another man?” I was stunned as I said “Same rules as last night?” “Yes, we both need to be in the same room.” “I'll text them.” I could believe what I was agreeing to. But I live to please Emily, and wanted to give her everything.

Me - Alice / Dave, we want to play again tonight if you are free. Emily wants time with just Dave. Alice are you ok with that? Alice - I would love to rent out hubby for a night. You and I can still enjoy one another if you'd like. Dave - I'm all in. 8pm our room work for you two? Me - Sounds great. See you later.

“They said yes.” I told Emily. “I can't wait.” Emily replied as she started moving down my chest. Emily's head was now between my legs. She stared at me firmly holding my morning wood. “Thank you for being ok with this.” Emily seductively said with her lips right next to my now bulging head. She proceeded to give what I can only describe as one of the top 5 blow jobs of my entire marriage. Both her hunger for me and desire to please were of the charts.

She finished the job with her lips at the very base of my shaft. Her eyes locked onto my expression of pleasure as I couldn't hold back any longer. After I was finished cumming (she knows how much I love to cum while she's deepthroating me). Emily slowly pulled her mouth off of me. I shuddered in pleasure as she dragged her lips the entire way up.

There was nothing for me to clean up as I got ready for the last day of the conference. Emily said she was just going to do some window shopping while I was away.

I couldn't remember a single subject from the conference that day. Memories of last night and imagining tonight filled my mind. I wondered how I would feel about seeing my wife with Dave. Jealousy? Aroused? Would more negative emotions bubble up? Would getting to watch my wife enjoy herself be as amazing as I imagined?

I thought back on one of my favorite experiences with Emily and I. It was a birthday present for me a few years ago. She let me watch her play with herself. Emily tied my hands and feet to a chair and told me my present was watching her and “Bill”.

Emily left the room for what seemed like an hour, and came back wearing her sexiest lingerie. Bra, panties, stockings, garter belt, she had gone all out on this birthday gift. Before I could even ask who's Bill, Emily pulled out an enormous pink dildo. Emily spent the next hour playing with Bill, pleasuring herself and making sure to visually tease me at every opportunity.

I was unable to touch her or myself the entire time. It was a wonderfully fun and torturous experience. After she had had her fill, she untied me, crawled onto the bed, ass facing me. I can still remember her exact words from that night, “There's still one more hole that needs filling…”

Thinking back on that present of hers I wondered if this night might be even better.

Lunch was uneventful. My boss introduced me to several potential clients. I never got a chance to talk to Dave. After lunch I texted Emily.

Me - Tonight I want you all to myself. For dinner that is. Emily - You don't want to show me off to some new client at dinner? Me - I'm doing more than showing you off after dinner, so why don't we enjoy some alone time first. Emily - That sounds like a wonderful idea. I'll be ready by 6. Me - I'm looking forward to it.

The conference concluded and Emily and I went to a quiet sushi restaurant overlooking the water for dinner. We talked about past trips together. Drank a little and just enjoyed our time together.

After dinner we went to our room to shower and get ready. Emily and I decided to dress like we were heading to the pool. I wore workout shorts and no shirt with a towel wrapped around my waist. Emily couldn't decide what was appropriate. “What do you think Dave would enjoy best?” Emily asked. “With a body as amazing as yours, why cover it.” I replied. “What, walk there naked!” “Yes. Wrap a towel around you and everyone will just assume that you are wearing a bathing suit under it.” “You don't think Dave will be upset with not getting to unwrap me?” “I think, by the time you walk to their room in just a bath towel, you are not going to want to wait for him to undress you.” “Fair point.” Emily sounded quite agreeable to my suggestion.

We quietly held hands walking down the hall to Alice and Dave's room. When we reached their door we paused. I looked at Emily. “Are you sure?” I asked. “Yes. Are you ok with this?” Emily replied back. “I want to watch you enjoy yourself. And if either of us is uncomfortable at any point, just say stop.” I said nervously. I knocked and Dave opened the door. “Come in, are we going to the pool before or after?” Dave joked. “We were just on our way for a skinny dip and thought you might want to join.” I joked back.

Emily and I walked in and were greeted by the same well decorated room as last night. Dave was in an open bathrobe with red shorts on. Alice was wearing a tight white button up shirt that started at the center of her vast chest and stopped at her midsection. She had paired it with a short black skirt and ponytail for her golden hair.

“Can Dave or I get you anything before we get started?” said Alice. “I'll take your husband for a bit if that's alright.” Emily joked as she grabbed Dave's hand and started pulling him to the far bed.

Alice and I followed and took a seat on the other bed to watch as Emily guided Dave to the foot of their bed. She let her towel drop to the floor exposing her fully nude petite athletic body. Emily promptly removed Dave's robe and started kissing his chest, working her way down.

Dave just stood there like a deer in headlights. The shock of how quickly Emily was progressing that evening was a surprise to all of us.

Emily was quickly on her knees kissing below Dave's navel. Emily stopped kissing as her hands reached for his red shorts. She slowly lowered his shorts down while savoring the view of his immense member dangling before her eyes.

By this point Alice and I were sitting facing the show. Alice's back against my chest and her ass pressed into my lap. Both of our attentions were firmly glued on our partners in front of us.

Emily proceeded to grab on to Dave's girthy member with one hand and worked her magic to get Dave fully aroused. All the while, Emily proceeded to stare at Alice and I. Emily's eyes somehow simultaneously saying this is mine now and thank you while her tongue danced along Dave's head and shaft.

Here was my wife stroking and licking another guy and I was frozen. Staring into my beautiful wife's hungry eyes.

After what could have been hours or just a few seconds, Dave was fully hard and starting to get into my wifes performance. His hand was on the back of her head gently encouraging her to try and fit more of himself into Emily's small mouth.

After a couple of minutes of Emily's sausage eating contest (she lost), Emily gently pushed him away and motioned for him to get on the bed. Dave laid down with his feet facing Alice and I, and his spit covered shaft rising above the bed like a shining skyscraper. Emily proceeded to climb up on him and continue to satisfy her oral fixation.

Alice and I could no longer see her expressions as she continued her work on Dave. Instead, we were now fixated on Emily's cute little ass that was up in the air facing us. Her ass was seemingly teasing us as it wiggled with every bobbing motion of her head on Dave. I could see her thin slit between her cheeks and I wanted so badly to go and taste Emily's sweet juices.

I started to get up when Alice grabbed my hands, turned her face towards mine and whispered "Stop. Let her enjoy her treat.” Alice placed my hands on her inner thighs saying without words "If you need to play with something, use me.”

My hand moved up to Alice's breast and firmly pressed her body into mine. My other hand gently forced her thighs further apart. If I couldn't enjoy my wife then I would just have to enjoy his.

Unfortunately, holding Alice's ample breast only slightly subdued my desire to touch Emily's wet lips. Emily must have heard my thoughts, I watched as if Emily was trying to tease me, her knees parted and her hand appeared between her thighs. I could still see the back of her head slowly bobbing up and down as she started to play with herself.

It was my birthday present all over again. Just like then I was unable to get up as I watched Emily pleasure herself but this time she was also pleasuring another man. I couldn't stop her or claim her or touch her. This was a thousand times more intense than my birthday present.

In protest, I forced Alice's legs as far apart as I could. Forced open her shirt and squeezed her now bare breast into the both of us as hard as I could. My mouth was salivating just wanting to taste my wife's sweet lips and cute ass.

I did the only thing I could think might help ease my pain, I sunk my teeth into Alice's soft neck, holding back just enough not to break her skin. Her breathing turned heavy as her hand embraced mine on her breast and her other hand pulled my head harder into her neck.

I let up on Alice's neck just in time to see my wife crawling up Dave's abbs. Her ass was still wiggling at me but now I could see her lips glistening wet in her juices. At this point I was extremely thankful for the multitude of mirrors around the room. In the closest mirror across from us I could see Emily's face as she sat up a little to straddle Dave.

Alice turned her face towards mine and whispered "This is my favorite part. I want your fingers in me when Dave stretches out your wife."

Fuuuuck, I couldn't believe what was happening. In my lap was a voluptuous blonde begging to be fingered while my hand overflowed with her bare breast. At the same time I'm watching a massive cock getting into position to fuck my wife!

The multitude of emotions was almost too much for me to handle. Alice must have scensed me freezing up as she grabbed my hand from her thigh and guided our fingers into her soaking hole.

Emily looked at the mirror and our eyes locked onto one another. Dave's hands were now cupping Emily's cute cheeks. Getting ready to ease my wife down on to him.

Alice moved herself higher up on my lap and pulled my cock out of my shorts. My fully erect head was now resting on the entry to her tight ass. Alice and I both knew the rules about no anal play. But damn Alice knew exactly how to torture me.

Emily now had Dave's tip fully covered by her little slit as she was slowly getting used to him. Her eyes were closed and she was deeply breathing through her parted lips. Dave was slowly working himself into her. Pulling out a little and pushing in a little deeper with every thrust.

My fingers were now firmly filling Alice as my palm vigorously rubbed her engorged clit. Alice's breathing became more rapid with every thrust of my hand inside her.

Dave's shaft was now fully engulfed by my wifes little lips. Dave's hands moved to Emily's thighs as Emily slowly sat fully up taking in every bit of Dave. Her heavy breath began to let out a beautiful moan as her hands grabbed Dave's chest to steady herself.

Alice must have wanted to hold her husband as much as I wanted to hold my wife. With both Alice and I fixated on the sight of her husband's shaft now completely filling my wife's tight hole. Alice reached down between her legs and started slowly stroking my shaft. She was matching every thrust in and out of my wife.

Watching Emily ride Dave, having my tip teased by Alice's tight ass, and now Alice's hand slowly working my shaft was too much for me to handle.

I forcefully pushed Alice off of me and onto the bed. Her hands just managed to catch herself so her face didn't get slammed against the sheet.

Alice's ass was now in the air just waiting for me. She didn't have to wait long for me to get on my knees and get into her. Without hesitation or delay I was fully inside Alice's wet pussy. She was quite warmed up from all our finger work and watching Dave and Emily. Alice was breathing fast and gripping the sheets as my pace and force quickened.

At hearing Alice's sounds of enjoyment, Emily stopped and opened her eyes. Emily's eyes again met mine. She looked shocked at first as she saw me forcibly pounding Alice from behind with such passionate violence. Something clicked in Emily right after. She grabbed Dave's hands and placed them on her ass. Emily then proceeded to lean down and whisper something in Dave's ear.

Dave's hands supported Emily's ass as he started fucking her like a well oiled machine. My view was now of my wife bent over with a massive cock thrusting in and out, slowly picking up speed like a train leaving a station. Emily was now moaning loudly. She had to be getting close to cumming herself.

Alice was still under me and getting everything I had. I grabbed her ponytail and forced her head up. Both of us were going to watch my wife getting split in two by Alice's husband.

One of Alice's hands was now under her. I could feel her frantically rubbing her clit. Alice was the first to cum that evening.

At Alice's sounds of pleasure and the feeling of her gripping my shaft as she came was too much for me to hold back any longer. I pushed in as deep as I could. My cock now pulsating inside her, filling Alice with load after endless load. I held myself in her not moving, just watching my wife get louder and louder with every long and deep thrust of Dave's.

Emily came harder than I had ever seen her before. I watched as her entire body started shaking. Dave continued to thrust harder and harder until Emily just laid on his chest completely limp. “Dave give the poor woman a break!” Alice interrupted.

I noticed I still hadn't let go of Alice or pulled out of her now stuffed box. I slowly pulled out and sat on the edge of the bed next to Alice's head.

“Wow!” Was all I could manage to get out. I was drained, emotionally and physically.

Emily rolled off of Dave. And he sat up still rock solid.

“Now serving customer number two.” Dave jokingly said.

Dave and I switched beds. As Dave rolled his dripping wife onto her back. Emily and I proceeded to passionately make out and hold one another.

We could see out of the corner of our eyes Alice's legs in the air as Dave's ass was hammering away. The sounds Alice was making had me hard and ready to go again. I got on top of Emily and entered her, while her arms and legs pulled my body fully into hers.

We heard the pounding stop. But we didn't care as Emily and I passionately reconnected. Emily's hands were squeezing into my back as her legs pulled me in deep with each thrust. Emily's soft moaning filling my ear.

Emily was getting close to cumming again when I whispered in her ear. “You and your little pussy will always be mine.”

After that, she was done. Her fingernails dug into my back as her moans roared in my ear. At the sound and feeling of my wife cumming underneath me, I was done. I continued thrusting as I reclaimed my wife with stream after stream of my cum filing her.

Emily and I continued to hug and kiss for a few minutes. Until we heard Alice making noises. We sat up and saw Dave's head buried between Alice's legs. Alice saw our confused looks.

“Dave liiiikkees to kiss my injuries and cleeeen me up.” She struggled to say as Dave was causing her to twitch uncontrollably with every lick of his tongue.

“Next time maybe Dave can clean me out.” Emily said eagerly.

Emily and I laid there holding each other and just watched Alice cum a few more times from Dave's oral talents.

Emily and I decided to just pass out in the second king bed with my exhausted and stuffed wife falling asleep in my arms.

In the morning I was woken up by the sounds of a bed squeaking. I peeked over Emily's hair to the other bed to see Alice on her side with Dave behind her. Dave's hand was covering Alice's mouth trying to silence her sounds. I could see Alice's legs spread with Dave slowly thrusting in and out filling her with his generous morning sausage.

I was startled when Emily grabbed my own cock and guided it into her. She must have been watching for a while as I was greeted with a soaking wet hole and slid right in.

I was now working on thrusting away in my wife, while Dave was taking care of his wife. All of us facing each other, wide awake.

Dave and I continued until everyone had had their morning orgasm. We all got up out of bed, both wifes dripping with matching creampies. Emily and I quickly put on our towels and thanked Alice and Dave for the amazing time. We started walking down the hall to our room.

“Well we are going to have a lot to look forward to next year.” Emily said and she squeezed my hands. ‘I can't wait.” I replied.