So I've been trying to teach myself how to scream for a couple months now, and I decided to record myself for the first time by screaming along to some songs from Memphis May Fire's Challenger in my car. Also sorry for the shit recording, my phone is the only mic I have.

Prove Me Right

Alive In The Lights

Vices

Jezebel

Basically what I try to do is combine both false chord and fry screaming (I think its called a mixed drive) to get my overall sound, with my higher screams being more fry and my lows being more false chord, but I think my mids and highs are bit too "airy". Also, my throat tends to get a bit dry (not painful, just dry) after just a few songs, is this normal? Thanks for all criticism/advice!