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It's a miracle, Doc. The story's breathing. The story's walking!
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I appealed to the good people of reddit for an answer to the hard question: "why is nobody reading my story?" And reddit answered. Oh, reddit answered. Reddit had many answers, much feedback, numerous issues.

I read those answers. I cried myself to sleep. And then I acted on them.

Title -> changed

Title SEO tags -> changed

Cover image -> changed

Blurb -> rewritten

Poetical grammar -> abandoned

Formatting -> reworked

And it actually made a massive difference. Like a massive difference. So thank you all for your feedback. And if you have more mean (constructive) things to say, please don't hesitate.

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https://preview.redd.it/bo8jwzolneld1.png?width=335&format=png&auto=webp&s=6f94e58fe3344f6157dbeaa4731f48ee7e00d708

Update - as requested in comment a before after image

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Oh I love that cover! You missed an apostrophe in your blurb tho: β€œcan ’ t-take-directions-to-save-his-life.”

Sounds like a good read :)

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