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My Predator Idea.
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Sorry that this is so rough. Just wrote it out over the last few mins. Ek Chuah by the way is one of a few war gods to the Mayan.

Predator: Ek Chuah

1567: Yucatan peninsula

A small band of Mayan warriors return to a village. They have just killed a few Spanish soldiers and are showing off their spoils.

From the trees, a Predators view of the camp. The cool background of the jungle and the red bodies of the Mayan. The Predator eyes them closely, deciding it's point of attack.

A noise gives him pause, and his attention is drawn to movement beyond the camp. It crouches, watching, as a garrison of Spanish overwhelm the camp. Killing everyone, including the women and children.

The Spanish are please with themselves. 32 Mayan lay dead, and not even a scratch on any of them. After ransacking the village they move off again into the jungle.

The Predator follows silently. He is as pleased as the Spanish, this new hunt looks far more fun.

A short time later a lone warrior returns to the village. Finding everyone dead. He easily spots the garrisons trail into the jungle. And follows.

The warrior uses his knowledge of the area and us able to get ahead of the Spanish. Crouching within a trees he plans his attack.

Suddenly the gound opens up and hell is unleashed. As some invisible demon tears through the bodies below.

One of the soldiers slashes at the air, but hits something solid. And the warrior sees the beast become visible, if only for a moment. Ek Chuah!! The god of war.

Once a god looked up to, the young warrior and many others blame. It was he that allowed the Spanish here to begin with. And with his death, the Mayan may be strong enough to defeat the Spanish for good.

So as the Predator stalks the conquistadors, our warrior stalks him.

The dwindling numbers of the Spanish scatter through the jungle. And the predator focuses on a small group. Picking them off one by one.

The warrior races to get ahead.

Two of the Spanish suddenly stop mid-sprint as they see a huge hole before them. A rock drops down into the cenotes.

They look nervously between the jungle behind them. And the giant sink hole in front of them.

Walking towards the soldiers, the Predator decloaks. It's time to claim his prize.

Its this moment the young warrior has been waiting for. And he runs out if the jungle from what seems like nowhere.

All four fall from the edge. Splashing into the water below.

After swimming ashore. Our warrior stands upon a large rock. He sees the two Spanish make it to land. But Ek Chuah is no where to be found.

Suddenly one of the soldiers gets thrown into the water, and our warrior sees as the other is lifted from the ground. A blade through his chest. And is then thrown to the ground.

The warrior produces a Spanish knife. Taken from one of his kills and slashed at the predator. But Ek Chuah is to powerful.

The warrior is on his back. Beaten. What man can kill a god after all.

From behind. The other conquistador, having retrieved his sword drives it into the back of the predator. Green blood drips from the tip sticking out of its stomach.

The Predator turns and grabs the Spaniard, snapping his neck in a single motion. Distracted. The warrior managed to get above him. Crashing down on Ek Chuah's head with a rock. They both crash into the water.

Ek Chuah is badly hurt. Only regaining consciousness as the warrior pulls the sword from it's back. He is standing over the predator now.

In a desperate attempt Ek Chuah roars at the warrior. Unphased, the warrior plunges the sword into his gods chest.

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