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One of my older poems
"Shattered"
shattered dreams and a broken heart like broken glass my life falls apart. Scattered pieces all around, forever lost, to never be found.
My heart is cold, black, and torn, the edges are rough, and badly worn. Covered in scars, and filled with rage, for mistakes I've made, i have myself to blame.
I am lost in a world that seems so fake, everything I've earned it seems to take, I try, and try so hard to learn, but in the end i always get burned.
Is it greed, is it guilt, or is it pain i feel. will i bleed, will i heal, is this place even real. i run, and run, so scared, and ashamed, for reasons unknown, maybe i'm afraid.
Where it ends, only time will tell, as i suffer, in this living' hell. a failure I've become, cause of obsession, my dreams are now my Shattered Lessons
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