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You took the abuse
And they tried to feed you shit
But you refused,
You called out for help
So many times
None of them answered
So you recluse
You produce and produce
Knowing that you can
Be of good use
You spend all day and night
Looking for clues
There is a mystery at foot
It's been playing on your
Mind, tugging on your heartstrings
It's obvious that you've been working
And if no one else tells you
I appreciate you,
Because baby you really made it
No matter what they said it
Never mattered who took the credit
One thing lead to another don't regret it
Let it continue on get better try to forget it
If you can stomach the load swallow and then feel so pathetic
You know your worth but still end up end up and then pregnant
It's like a miscarriage to end up packed up back Again
in that feetle position questioning
Thankful for the blessings swearing it's
destiny that has you obsessed
What's one night, alone on the
Swing set, dead phone and
No place to set your head
Got a sore neck, you picked
A war dick, so this is your net
This could be a portrait
A tune of torment,
Sit disillusioned in your vortex
Now load up the needle,
Give it one flick, you'll feel a
Slight prick but don't panic
It'll all be over before you know it
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