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Would love some feedback on my latest poem, hope you enjoy!
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i don't know how i feel.
it's like i feel it all, but i feel nothing at all. i feel the hurt in my heart that my mind tells me not to feel.
my mind tells me to act out while my heart tells me to stay calm.
i'm at war with myself.
Bombarded with enemy fire and flames grew stronger,
This is a war that I will win, or so I hope
Truth be I am outnumbered by my emotions.
Unfortunately this victory is not mine to grasp hold of.
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