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To start, I have never been the best at poetry, nor have I ever really understood how to write it. So if this isn’t considered poetry let me know. If you have any helpful advice or want to help me, please dm me or leave a comment. I couldn’t find a sub for people to help, so this is where it is going
This world seems so empty and bare
Feet always on the move with no destination in sight
People putting up a façade
What is reality anymore
Leaving this world is sinful
but staying is ever so painful I don’t know what I am doing here
no matter how hard I search
This world is so empty and bare
With jobs that waste your life
Currency turns the globe I can’t find happiness no matter where I look
So I ask again why is it sinful to leave
a world that is not made for me
Why is it that I have to wait for it to get better
Why is it I have to put on a smile
Why is it I gotta pretend that I am happy
I cry every night
No end in sight
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