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Draft of the first half of a play I'm working on. Looking for feedback on how it feels going up to the act break, and what people expect in act two.
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How Do You Know Charles Baker? is a series of interviews with the former associates of a cult like figure.

50 Pages approximately 10,000 words so far.

What I'm looking for is general feedback on how it reads with focus on a few key points.

1- What do you make of Robin as a character? Do they feel fleshed out and driven? What's your assessment of them as a person so far?

2- Do the individual interview subjects feel like distinct characters? And what picture are they building of Charles.

3- What do you expect to happen in the next act? Where do you think the play is going and what are you expecting to see/ looking forward to in the next act?

Thanks for reading

Regards,

Avouleance.

EDIT: Content warning for adult themes and language including ideas of abuse and malnipulation.

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