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Unexpected Growth [BE, PE, Lactation]
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Lostinlife1990 is in BE, PE, Lactation
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So this is my very first story and I don't have that much of an intention to write more, but I may. As I'm sure you'll notice it's written from an unusual POV. It started as messages I was sending to a female friend through DM on here. I asked her if she wanted me to try my hand at turning it into a story, and she said yes.

I am accepting of any sort of feed back you're willing to give but I just want to say a few things first.

  1. I'm sure the punctuation and formatting are off and confusing.

  2. I feel like I have real trouble with dialogue. I worry about the formatting, the punctuation, and repetition. Like saying "he said", "she sighed" and so on.

  3. I've had a few people read it and ask if I wanted them to teach me how to write better, but while I really do appreciate the offer, I'm not sure about me writing in the future.

  4. I wrote this for a friend and only put fetishes bother her and I were comfortable with or liked. So any comments like "there should have been giantess?" or "why doesn't her ass get bigger too?" Don't mean much to me. Sorry.

Without further ado: Unexpected Growth

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