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Critique/Suggestions for first story
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Hey all this is my first attempt at writing a no sleep story. If y'all could leave me suggestions/thoughts on both story and style that would be great. I know my grammar isn't the best but if anyone has any grammar manuals/books they recommend that would be great.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1djOQsW5nasDnm3lNCbYeODkBgi0JXoy-xiyU9Val0pE/edit
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