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Seeking for feedback on a song, please
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Hello guys! I have been working on this song for a while, but I still feel like something is missing or wrong... Firstly, when comparing to other songs, I noticed that the voice is kinda not "in your face". My guess was that the low end was taking too much space, but when reducing it (bass)...the song felt dead. Also, when listening to the song on my phone at max volume, it feels so loud that it distorts (not sure if it's only me though). I also want to inform you guys that the beat used is a 2-track from Youtube (used for practice). Your recommendations or critics would be highly appreciated. If something else could be also improved, let me know please. Don't feel bad, I'm here to get better! Thank you! https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OH8AKvi1wmOpanWb6EXU4M8wbPgRP7CN/view?usp=share_link

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