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FYI, this is the first story I've ever written Part 1 can be found here:
https://www.reddit.com/r/literotica/s/ydnnF83nhC
I would love feedback as Part 3 is still being written. Also, If anyone knows of any authors of a similar writing style to this erotica please post a link.
P.S. I'm writing all of this as an anonymous fictional erotica to share with my wife. Ladies please let me know how I can improve the story's feminine appeal.
Day 2
In the morning I woke up and got ready for what would normally be several interesting seminars on building design. Emily was still sleeping when I left for the hotel conference hall. She would probably wake up in an hour and relax at the hotel spa most of the day like she did every year.
I settled into my chair in the conference hall and quickly zoned out on the lecture. It was something about new composite construction materials. Normally I'd be fully engulfed, and geeking out on these lectures. But alI could think about for the next few hours was tonight. So many questions running through my mind. Would Emily and I actually be able to go through with this? What does Alice look like under those flowy dresses that she always wore? Would I have performance issues in front of other people?
Emily and I met junior year in college and had been exclusively together since then. Neither of us had ever done remotely like this in our entire lives. I had no idea if Emily would enjoy watching or if she would be jealous, depressed, angry or just excited. Would this night be a once in a lifetime fantasy come true or a train wreck?
In between the negative thoughts, an image of Alice kept creeping into my mind. Alice and Emily were both attractive but in opposite ways. Emily had a tight athletic body with just the right amount of feminine curves. Alice was all curves. How would it feel to kiss her plump lips? How would it feel to kiss someone who wasn't Emily? How do I perform at my peak for Alice? Will my techniques for Emily work for Alice?
About this time I figured Emily might be getting out of bed and I should check in on her. Me - Good morning sunshine. How did my perfect wife sleep? Emily - Good morning sexy. I slept surprisingly well considering the conversation last night and our plans tonight. Me - Are you still ok with Alice, Dave and Me? Emily - As of right now… yes… Definitely a lot of butterflies in my stomach and lower ;) Me - Just remember, we can stop at any time. No questions asked. You can just sit in the room and sleep if that's what you want. Emily - Sleep and miss out seeing two handsome men playing with Alice? Never! Me - Again. I can not stress this enough. You are still the love of my life and I want YOU to enjoy yourself. If you want to play with Dave or we just leave together at any point just say the word. P.S. You are the best wife for saying yes. Emily - Thank you. But I am being selfish in wanting to watch Dave's chiseled ass work its magic. Me - Well enjoy the spa with that image in your thoughts. I've got to get back to pretending to listen to this lecture. Talk to you later.
After what seemed like just a few minutes daydreaming. It was time for lunch. My company had provided a lunch buffet at the hotel so that we could socialize with our clients and other business partners. I quickly spotted Dave and walked over to say hello. “How is the conference going.” I tried to act like everything was normal. "It's fine. More importantly, how are you two with tonight's plans?” Dave cut right to the chase. “Lots of nerves but mostly excitement.” “Alice and I are glad you two agreed to meet tonight. We always felt comfortable around you two and are excited to see more of you." Dave said enthusiastically. "Emily and I are glad as well. Thank you for being willing to start slow." I had so many questions for him about this new experience that they were inviting us into. How long have you two been doing this? How many couples have you been with? How do you not mind other guys with your wife? How is Alice not jealous with other guys? I had so many questions in my mind that were all trying to burst out of my mouth. Dave replied "Not a problem. Of course we are a little sad that Emily doesn't want to join. Alice loves to watch. But we want this to be enjoyable for everyone with zero pressure." "Is Alice OK with the current arrangement? I mean has she done this before?" I tried to be cool with my nervous question but they were too numerous to hold them all back. "She has been the center of attention before. And she thoroughly enjoyed herself last time it was only three people." Dave had a huge grin on his face as if he was remembering scoring a championship winning touchdown from his past.
Dave and I said our goodbyes as I continued to socialize with my other business associates at the buffet.
I sat down for the next lecture, completely ignoring the speaker and started texting Emily Me - Hello princess, how was your spa day? Emily - Refreshing as always. Guess who I spent the morning with? Me - I'd say Dave but he didn't say anything during lunch 😉 Emily - That would be breaking our rules and I wouldn't want to deprive you of getting to watch 😘. Me - My 2nd guess then, Debbie. You haven't talked to my boss's new wife since their wedding. Emily - Strike 2. We did have a good time at that wedding. Still not quite sure how we didn't get caught. Me - I think we did get caught, just nobody said anything. Lots of interesting looks in our direction for the rest of the night. Or maybe it was just your enchanting looks overshadowing the bride's. My final guess... Alice Emily - We have a winner. She seemed quite eager about tonight. Especially after I told her about your proclivity for dining on smooth wet lips. She's getting everything waxed and freshened up for this evening. Me - Dave seemed to imply she was a little disappointed that she doesn't get to watch you. I assume you are still not ready for more? Again are you still ok watching the three of us? Emily - I am not ready for more. But I am physically dripping waiting to watch my husband and Dave fully use Alice. Me - You are incredible. Best wife ever (I can never say it enough). Hopefully another time you will get to be the center of attention. Emily - Maybe. Until then get back to paying attention at work. I need you to not get fired so you can keep being my sugar daddy.
She was right, I did need to pay attention to some of these new architectural concepts if I wanted to keep my job. Alas my mind couldn't stop thinking about Alice and Dave. I had never done anything with a couple. Were there unwritten rules I didn't know about? So many questions and thoughts kept fading in and out of my consciousness.
After the last lecture I texted Emily some slightly unfortunate news. Me - I have to go to dinner with my boss and a new client. I'll meet you at the bar. Emily - Ok, anything you need from me before then? Any ideas on what I should wear tonight? Without any hesitation I quickly sent my reply. Me - All I need is for you to stay as wonderful as you are. Wear your black cocktail dress, no panties, no bra. Emily - Love you too. See you tonight.
Dinner was uneventful. I didn't have any time to dwell on tonight's planned activities due to the potential new client's long list of ideas he wanted my feedback on. After what seemed like a full day of work wrapped up into a single meal, I was finally free for the evening. It was already 8:00, so I skipped changing out of my suit and went straight for the hotel bar.
As I walked over to the bar, I quickly spotted the three of them chatting. Dave was again wearing slim jeans and a button up shirt. Alice was in a classy loose fitting black dress that somehow managed to subdue her ample chest. Emily on the other hand was wearing her best come-fuck-me tight black dress. The dress was clinging to her like a second skin. Her hips, ass and perky breasts were on full display. Her nipples were just barely covered by the top of the dress. The beautiful ladies were both seated at the bar with Dave standing between them. I stopped walking when I first saw them at the bar. Is this actually happening? I paused to watch my wife flirting with Dave. Her in that sexy dress flirting with another guy. Seeing it made me just want to sit down just out of sight and watch. Alas, I was already late and I was excited to see Alice get out of her dress and on to me.
I continued over to them and said hello. “Welcome to the celebration.” Dave cheerily gave me a hand shake and a bro hug. “Sorry, I'm late. What are we drinking tonight?” I replied as I moved next to my wife to kiss her. “I got you a beer and Dave just ordered a round of Tequila shots” Emily said gleefully. If Emily was nervous, I couldn't tell. We drank and made small talk for a few minutes before the bartender brought over our shots. Dave raised a glass and gave a quick toast, “A toast to new memories. And the great friends we make them with.” We pounded down our shots and closed out our tab.
On the way up to the room, Alice and Emily talked to each other while Dave and I remained silent just responding with the occasional “yes” and “that sounds about right”. I was too nervous to think about anything other than the two women we were escorting up to the hotel room. We entered Alice and Dave's room and were presented with a large single room suite. The two king beds had been neatly stripped down to just clean sheets and a couple of pillows. A small couch and coffee table were moved so that they faced the beds. The lights had been already dimmed to a softer setting but were still bright enough for everyone to enjoy the view. Soft jazz was playing on the TV behind us as we all stood in the middle of the room behind the couch. One peculiar thing that stood out to me was the astounding amount of hotel mirrors in the room. The closet had a mirror door. A mirror hung on the bathroom door. Dave and Alice had left the large wardrobe open exposing the mirrors on the doors inside. No matter where you were in the room you would be able to get a great view. “You two sure know how to set up a room” I nervously complimented. “Thank you. Emily, we set up the couch for you. Do you need anything before I steal your husband?” Alice said with a sweet tone. Emily replied “I'm alright. Thank you inviting us. Don't let Ben off easy, he's here to work.” I escorted my wife to the couch and gave her a hug. “I love you” I whispered in her ear as she sat down. “I know.” Emily replied. She is such a geek. Alice took my hand in hers and pulled me to the side of the bed. My ass resting on the bed and my hands pressing into the small of Alice's back. That's when she kissed me.
The feeling of being kissed by her was truly fireworks going off. Both of us instantly connected. All of my fears and worries were gone. All I wanted was Alice. I quickly tossed my suit jacket aside as Alice's hands worked on undoing what seemed like 100 buttons on my shirt. Our mouths exploring each other's faces the entire time. All the buttons were undone and I was starting to loosen my tie when Alice grabbed it with both hands and cinched it back up. “Shirt and tie stay on while you are at work.” She commanded. Fuck me. I thought. This is going to be wild. My hands went up to her arms to pull her closer when she then pushed me back, breaking our lips from one another. She took a step back from me. What did I do wrong, I thought. Alice's hands reached across her body onto her shoulder as she freed herself from her dress. The loose dress slowly fell to the floor exposing all of Alice. My heart stopped. Her chest was better than I could have ever imagined. Ample natural looking DDD breasts with nipples erect begging for attention. My eyes continued down to see a soft gently curving waist that smoothly continued to her shapely hips and rounding out down her long legs. Alice stopped and just said “Well what do you think?” I was speechless. I got up and cupped her bare cheeks with my hands, pulling her back to me. I let go of one cheek and my hand cupped her full bosomed breast as I buried my face in her chest. Emily was naturally thin with tight athletic features. Squeezing Alice was completely different, her skin stretched as my hands pulled themselves further into her female curves. My mouth moved over her erect nipple as her hand pushed my face deeper into her chest. After a little bit of enjoyment with playing with her bosom, she pulled my head back and got on her knees. I was rock hard from the moment her lips touched mine. But now as her hands removed my paints, my cock was throbbing just inches from her face in anticipation. I suddenly remembered we had an audience. I looked around the room and saw Dave was in a bathrobe sitting on the couch with Emily. They were on opposite sides of the couch just watching Alice and I. Dave smiled and gave a thumbs up. Emily blew a seductive kiss in approval. I looked down in time to see my cock get released from my briefs. Alice licked my shaft and held it for a minute, like a cat playing with its victim before her lips engulfed my cock. Her eyes never broke contact with mine as I watched all of me disappear into her mouth. Alice proceeded to do what could only be described as sucking my soul out of my body. Within a minute my legs were shaking as my shaft was firing load after load into Alice's mouth. Her lips stayed on my shaft still performing their magic as her eyes squinted slightly in triumph for her work. She swallowed every last drop and stucked me clean before standing up.
“My turn to repay the favor.” I said as I helped her laydown on her back. I got on top of her and deeply kissed her lips letting my tongue explore that talented mouth. One hand supporting myself, my other hand squeezing an ample breast. I moved slowly down her body, stopping for a moment to tease her nipples. My arms reached under her long legs and strained to reach around those large curvy hips. I pulled her into me. I kissed around her thighs and worked quickly towards her smooth lips. As my tongue started to work its magic, I felt the bed moving and saw Dave get on the bed, lean over Alice and start to make out. Fondling and kissing her breasts. I buried my face deeper. Her taste was different then Emily but still sweet tasting to my tongue. Her lips and mound were bigger than Emily's petite pussy buy still a beauty to behold. As my face was engulfed in Alice's sweet pussy, my cock was quickly recovering for round 2, being edged on by the sounds of Alice's pleasure. Alice's hips started to grind into my face as she started to breathe faster and faster. Her hand shoved my face deeper into her. Her hips now forcefully moved up and down, as she used my face as her personal sex toy. She quickly orgasmed and the pace of her humping slowly receded. The three of us sat up and everyone looked at my cock like it was the only meat in town. “Good, you're ready to start the main course. Lay down.” Alice commanded me. Dave moved off the bed as I layed down and Alice climbed on top of me. She firmly grabbed my cock and guided it in her. Alice's eyes were closed and mouth open as she slowly started grinding our hips together. My shaft was fully erect enjoying this new experience. I could feel her gripping down hard on my shaft with her tight pussy. Alice's tits were swaying with every thrust of her hips. She opened her eyes and looked down at me with a devilish grin. She reached for my tie and cinched it up tightly, slightly choking me. “You need to look professional while you are at work” She jokingly said. Dave came and laid down next to us, his back down on the bed, feet by my head and his…
It doest do justice to call it an erection. Dave was a very lucky man both with a hot wife and a monumental sized member. Alice was enjoying her cowgirl riding on me as she moved one of her hands from my tie onto Dave's monumental shaft slowly stroking him. I looked past Dave's legs and could see Emily on the couch. Emily had her dress pulled up, one leg on the coffee table, the other spread out on the couch. One hand was playing with her nipple, the other circling her clit. She was watching intensely, her eyes glued to the real life porno that was in front of her. Her hand rubbing her clit matching every movement Alice's hips made on top of me.
After a few minutes of this bliss I was ready to put on a show for my wife. I pulled Alice closer to me, kissed her and said “I want to bend you over while you blow your husband.” Alice promptly dismounted me and moved to face Emily. Alice's hand grabbed Dave's shaft for support as she got down on her hands and knees. I moved her hips into position, legs spread and ready for me. In the mirror I watched as Alice's lips went down onto that huge shaft. I decided before I reentered Alice, I wanted to get another quick taste of her sweetness. I let my tongue start at her clit working up. I ended with a quick lap of the tongue around her rim and felt her hips shudder in delight. I felt a little sorry for Alice, as continuing that activity was just for Emily. I got on my knees and into position behind Alice. Alice was now in a slow rhythm, her head bobbing up and down on Dave's immense shaft. I eased myself inside her and got into rhythm with them. Alice let out a little moan as I filled her from behind.
We got into a deep slow rhythm, in and down. Up and out. Emily now had both hands in between her legs with 2 fingers in her and 4 fingers rubbing her clit. Emily and I locked eyes on one another. I broke rhythm from Alice's bobbing as I started to slowly increase my pace. Thrusting harder and faster. Emily's hands were still matching every thrust. Alice was struggling to breathe, her nostrils flared with every quicking breath. Her moans being silenced by Dave's shaft filling her throat. Faster and faster I went, forcefully holding Alice's hips. She was now my sex toy as Emily and I were watching each other pleasure ourselves. Emily's moaning overshadowed Alice's muffled sounds. At the sight of my wife cumming I pushed all the way inside Alice and spurted my load deep inside her. As I pulled out, I suddenly realized that this was the second woman ever that I had gotten to cum inside.
I got up and walked over to Emily, nelt down on the floor in front of her. Cupped her face in my hand and kissed her in a romantic deep embrace. I took a seat next to Emily and drank some water while we watched Alice ride Dave in reverse cowgirl.
After a few minutes watching, Emily started fondling my sack. “Time for you to get these balls back in the game.” she said squeezing and tugging on my testicles. After her prompting I was immediately at half mast and got back up. Alice saw me rising to the occasion and stopped riding Dave and with a giggle said “Dave, it's spit roasting time again.” Alice lifted herself off of Dave's cock and laid on the bed belly up, with her head hanging off the edge ready for me. Dave got on top and started to get into his rhythm. I walked up and put my cock right in Alice's waiting mouth. She grabbed my ass and hip to steady herself. Dave was starting to pound harder and deeper with every thrust. Alice's tits jiggling around like big bowls of jello. I squeezed them with both hands to keep them steady. Alice's mouth was squeezing down on me with every hard thrust of Dave. Her moaning again silenced, this time by me getting back to full strength.
Dave was pounding so hard now it was difficult for me to stay inside Alice's mouth. She pushed me away and screamed “FUCKING CUM IN ME ALREADY!” At that command Dave pounding increased in speed and Alice's mouth free from obstruction let out the loudest screams of passion I've ever heard. The entire floor of the hotel must have heard her. Dave gave his last few violent thrusts deep inside her and slowly pulled out. “She's all yours. ” Dave said looking at Alice's spread out limp body. “Alice, are you ok with me having another round? “ I asked. My dick was rock hard after watching Dave and Alice climax together. Her huge chest was heaving as she worked to catch her breath. Her entire body was now glistening with sweat. She grabbed my hand and slowly guided me on top of her. I looked down at her swollen pussy as I got into position on top of her. Alice's creampies were leaking out as a stream of cum was running down her ass onto the bed . She pulled me down onto her sweaty body. Her legs wrapped up around me and pulled me all the way inside her. This time she felt completely different.
I could still tell my cock was in her but it was so smooth, wet and free inside her. Alice had no strength left to grip my cock as she tiredly whispered in my ear “Please cum inside me again. Fuck me as hard as you need to.” I jokingly replied “yes boss.“ as I started pumping. It was so slippery and smooth that pumping inside her felt like my shaft was riding a water slide, just quickly shooting down and back up the same wet slide. The feeling was unique and intense. But I was in need of more stimulation if I was to get off a third time.
I was pounding her nearly limp body as fast as I could manage. Alice was still quivering from her last orgams and softly moaning with each shallow breath. Emily came over in front of me. She leaned over Alice's face, grabbed my head and passionately kissed me while I was railing Alice. She knew I needed help. Emily grabbed Alice's legs and held them up so I could maintain my rapid pounding.
After a couple of minutes of deap hard fucking, Emily gently lowered Alice's legs back down. She grabbed my tie with both hands. With all the might her small frame. could muster, she cinched down my tie. Breathing became near impossible. Emily pulled my face into hers. “Cum in her and I'll let you breathe.” She commanded. Emily then bit my lower lip and kept holding my lip with her teeth tightening them with every thrust. That sent me over the edge. I filled Alice with my 3rd load of the night.
I pulled out looking down at the creampie mess now smeared all over her pussy and ass. Alice just laid there with a satisfied grin on her face. Her arms and legs sprawled out limp on the bed. Without moving a muscle Alice managed to let out a cheerful but exhausted “Thank you for cumming tonight. And cumming several times. Maybe we can see you tomorrow night?” I kissed her cheek and said “Hopefully. And thank you again for having us over.” Dave showed us to the door and gave us bathrobes to wear back to our room. My clothes he has already piled up ready for us. “Seriously, thank you we had fun.” Dave said with a grin. “Please let us know if you are free tomorrow.” “Will do.” I replied as we gathered our things. We started to leave as I saw Dave move back to the bed. His head started kissing between Alice's legs.
Emily and I quickly got back to our room. I was about to shower when Emily spread herself on the bed and called out “I need you to work overtime. I want your naughty tool in me.” Despite Emily's best efforts, I never got back to full strength. And there was no way I had anything left in me to finish. But it was still hard enough for Emily to be satisfied. We showered and cuddled in bed, quickly falling asleep.
Part 3
Emily woke me up 10 minutes before my alarm. She pulled off the blankets. Climbed on top of me. Ripped off her nightgown right as I started stretching. “Well hi there beautiful. I guess you are in a perky mood today.” I yawned as she laid down on top of me. “Ben, I am ready. I want to play with Dave.” She said, staring at me in a serious but loving manner.
***Just a teaser as I am still writing the final part of this story
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