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Tick tick, another day fades away- Who will I be when i awake today Within myself I am lost and found My lungs collapse and I begin to drown. Tick tick, the accursed clock now all I hear My own thoughts cower in fear All the color fades to gray What i was is in disarray TICK- the clock freezes, what I see before me, a void in pieces I try to run but begin to fall the clock, in time, will catch us all Tick tick, my time fades away. What would you have me become today?
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