To Update: So I've revised for a simpler design based on the feedback yesterday (thank you!). Both seem like they're missing something that I can't put my finger on. I think it's because it's a plain field with no ordinaries, only charges. Also, I have two different olive branches. One is more circlet-like and the other is just a branch that's been flipped horizontally. I'm curious what you all think about how this would go on something without color or only one color. And any thoughts on the azure vs gules background?

Previously said: The hare is a play on my last name. An olive tree/ branch/ circlet and shield shape are about the only other things I'm wed to. Any thoughts are very much appreciated!

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