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This isn’t the first book I’ve read by this author. I read his necromancer series back when it came out and dropped it by the 10th chapter.
I should have not picked this up.
The MC of this series is one of the most pathetic characters that I have ever read. He is a 6’5 giga Chad that is in his mid 20’s with a 11’ member that sleeps with women all the time. He complains that he is lonely and woe is me. Wah, wah. The harem is obviously in to him and he keeps them at arms length because he’s not confident in himself as they throw themselves at him?
But he still goes on dates, makes out with them and gets frisky but he is so self conscious about himself.
This guy has everything a person needs. Money, handsome, packing, property, home and animals but he’s wah, wah, wah.
He lets himself get pushed around. He follows women like a lost puppy but says he needs to be alone.
Oh, he’s a dead beat dad. He has two kids that he knows about but doesn’t put themselves in their life because it’s not right and wah is me.
The writer spends like 60% of the time just going on and on about pointless things going around the MC.
Oh, the main LI always calls him King and he calls her queen. She’s mah queen!!!
I hate this guy. I hate him. He’s supposed to be a vet and a hardened guy but he comes across as a college freshman that can’t talk to women.
The author does go with his rape fetish in here too. Won’t go into detail but it really is anger inducing.
The premise is a nice idea but a piss poor execution.
I rate this 3/10. I give props for originality on concept and actually making each harem member not a copy and paste.
The main character is way too pathetic.
I recommend not reading anything this author writes. It’s all pretty much the same.
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