All tags that didn't fit in - [playful, nasty brat energy][pet names][punishing][handcuffs][kissing][tonguefucking][mutual masturbation][established relationship][choking] via [forceful kissing]

Premise: speaker and listener have been in a dom/sub relationship for a while now, but it was mostly a sweet and gentle one, with the sub always doing what she was supposed to. But today it'll change. When dom comes back home, she discovers her sub didn't do anything she was supposed to. And she also acts completely differently, talking back at you, mocking, even provoking and insulting you! Why did she turn into such a brat? It's like she wants to be properly punished and put in her place

Happy pride month everyone ^w^ . Today I come to you with not one, but two (!) scripts at once. Both in the same scenario, but showing it from the opposing POVs, one for dom speaker and bratty listener, and the other with them switched. Feedback especially appreciated on this one, as it was pretty new writing experience to me (but a very fun one). Hope you like them both.

Also, if you decide to comment, could you tell which of the two you liked more/think was written better? Don't have to ofc, but I'm curious

Ver 1 with dom speaker, for bratty listeners who want to be punished.

Ver 2 with sub speaker, for doms who need to remind her of her place.

Notes:

• there aren't any words referring to specific genitals throughout either version. In both the dom rides her sub's face, and later after that masturbates her until she cums
• For [CNC] and [Rape] Tags: I added a [CNC] and [Rape] tags, since the dom is forcing herself on the sub. Even though that's what the sub wants and was planning to happen (and why she was provoking the dom all along), I wasn't quite sure if those would apply, and decided to add them cause I decided "better safe than sorry" with this kind of content and warning those who would want to check this out. The whole thing still is something that both of them do want

Want to check out other scripts I made? All can be found here