First-Timer. Comments and Critique Welcomed!

Script By u/bettylaflame.

Synopsis: The story revolves around two siblings stuck with each other over the summer. Of course, leave it up to the good-ole stepmother to force a step-brother into hanging out with his younger step-sister. Naturally, the two siblings don't get along, barraging the other with witty insults, snarky comments, and low-blows at every opportunity. However, when his step-sister asks him to help prepare for a date, the older step-brother decides to delay his plans and lend a helping hand by helping her pick out an outfit. As usual, it takes longer than expected, but for unforeseen reasons. Through choosing scandalous outfits, the little step-sister reminds her brother she's all grown up. Likewise, he reminds her too-- at least, his cock did. So, as a reward, the step-sister decides to lend her brother a hand-- or rather, two, showing him how to stay /u/Mister_Voice/M4F-Script-FIll-Cool-for-the-Summer-Stepcest-Big-Step-BroLittle-Step-Sis-Seducing-Speaker-Hard-Mdom-Switchy-Degradation-Possessive-Strip-tease-CMNF-Oral-Hair-pulling-Doggy-Spanking-Rough-Begging">Cool For The Summer. In the end, it turns out his stepmom's idea wasn't so bad after all.

VA's Notes: So, new guy here-- sorta. I'm an erotic writer that realized he has a pretty nice voice. Thus, decided to finally venture out and post something that'll hopefully make others agree. This post is a one-take with some improvisions here and there to make the script reflective of my personality-- which I'm sure you'll get to know with time. All-in-All, just another listener deciding to branch out and become an actor and writer.

I know tips like SFX, better editing, and more re-takes to nail the performance would've definitely made it better. Nonetheless, figured it doesn't matter how bad the first one is. After all, we all gotta start somewhere, write?

As Always, Perverse Responsibly and Cum Again!