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Addition tags: [Speaker Orgasm M] [Listener orgasm F] [COVID talk] [Aftercare] [Possible sad ending] [heavy dirty talk] [degradation] [emotion] [crying] [L-bomb]
Synopsis: A former addict, falling off the wagon, begs his current GF to let him fuck others, as he doesn't want her to see his debased nature - but his GF has a better idea to help him release his darker side...
I posted a version of this script last night, but the original had (what I know now) a throw away paragraph that included sexual abuse on a kid. I was unsure if I had handle it appropriately, so I went to the amazing people at GWAScriptGuild for advice (massive thanks to u/dominaexcrucior, with brilliant and thoughtful breakdown) & I've come to the conclusion I'm just not a good enough writer yet to include this destructive subject thoughtfully, and with the merit it deserves. I had planned to re-write the script, to improve, but I'm kind of turned off by the whole thing now - I like the story, and I feel it hits some good erotic beats, but it's probably better without going deeper into subjects I'm just not ready to present properly.
That said, I think its still a good story, worth a quick read! Please go ahead and check out the:
Edit: After talking to some people last night, I made some edits, mostly to the format, but I also cleaned up the grammar and punctuation, plus cleaned up the ending and added a few more lines of dialogue - ended up with an extra 1000 words, but it definitely makes it a stronger script.
As always, any performers who wish to use this script have full rights to change lines, add more sections or take different approaches to Sound Effects and Tone directions.
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