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A submissive man loves his Dom girlfriend, but has told her not to call him a bug, as he has a phobia - in the middle of being denied an orgasm (after a week), he snaps when she provokes him by calling cock an insect he and turns the tables. The sex turns into a emotional and sexual fight for dominance...
I wanted to try and write a switch y script, where the turn from Sub to Dom isn't agreed upon thing, but a spur of the moment event - not too sure I nailed it, without it becoming a CNC, but I'll leave that up to the readers. I'm still very new at this, and I am trying to keep the scripts short (under 3000 words) for now, and diving straight into the sex, leaving out a lot of backstory - let me know in the comments if you like this, or if a slow burn story is more to your thing.
As always, if this script is performed, the performer is open to change, adlib or alter any line or tone to their liking - I just like getting my feet wet for now and growing as a writer (plus it'd be thrill no matter what) :)
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