In this script, the speaker uses her mind control powers to move in with another woman and to control both her and her fiancé. As I picture it, there are three levels of sound.

The first is an almost subliminal ambient drone. It can be low humming, a pulsing or an electronic sound. It should be very quiet, almost too quiet to be heard, but still present. It runs throughout the recording, fading in before the first words and fading out after the last words.

The second are the very quiet words written like <… this…>. These are the thoughts being projected by the speaker, using her mind control powers. They should be very quiet, again hardly audible, almost whispered. Some reverb or echo would also help. They should have an ethereal quality, so that they do not clash with the spoken dialogue.

The third are the words of the script, spoken by the narrator to her victim. With one noted exception, the words should be quiet, at times, almost hypnotic. I’ve repeated certain phrases and passages to try to give the words a kind of hypnotic effect.

The timing and content of the <….> layer is subject to improv. The idea is show how the subliminal control is influencing the listener.

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{drone fades in}

<… help me…>

<… trust me…>

<… obey me…>

So… you don’t mind if I move in with you. Right? Ashley?

<… you want to help me…>

<… please me…>

You want to think about it? Really, what is there to think about? I know we’ve just met, but I’ve known Steve for a while now… You trust Steve, don’t you? I mean… he is your fiancé.

<… you want to please me…>

So, you should want to help me then. Right? Ashley? And I really do need a place to stay.

<… obey me…>

Really? I can move in with you? Right? Ashley? Are you sure it’s ok?

<… you want to make me happy…>

Well… if you insist, I suppose I can. But I may stay for a long time. That’s ok, right? Ashley?

<… you want me…>

That’s wonderful. We’ll be roommates. That’s wonderful, isn’t it. Ashley? You must be so looking forward to that.

<… obey me…>

Oh… but I won’t be helping to pay the rent. That’s not going to be a problem, is it? Ashley?

<… you want to obey me…>

Is it? It’s not a problem, right? You can pay the rent. You don’t mind, do you.

<… you want me…>

Good. That will free me up to spend more time with Steve.

<… want me…>

Oh yes… your Steve. You know I met him last week. At the bar. We’re fucking.

<… please me…>

That’s ok, isn’t it? Ashley? You don’t mind, do you? I mean… I know he’s your fiancé, but… you don’t mind that he and I are fucking. Right? Ashley?

<… obey…>

<…. Want me…>

I didn’t think so.

<… please me…>

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[FX: Door closing]

Oops… there he is now.

[loudly, to Steve in a flirty voice] Hi Steve. You can put that box upstairs, in the bedroom, ok? Thanks, sweetie.

[back to Ashley] He’s early. Guess he can’t wait to fuck me. Again.

<… obey…>

What? He’s your fiancé? I know… but you said you didn’t mind, right? Ashley?

<… love me…>

Look… I can see you’re a little jealous. But there’s no need. After all, he’s your fiancé, right? Not mine… Steve and I… we’re just fucking. That’s ok, right? Ashley?

<… love…>

<… obey…>

Tell you what… if you’re good… and I mean really good… when I’m not busy with Steve… or whatever… I’ll let you lick my pussy. That’s fair, right? Ashley? So, you see… there’s no need to be jealous… right? Ashley?

<… want me…>

<… obey…>

Good. I’m glad that’s settled.

So… why don’t you scamper upstairs and send Steve down to me. While he and I are fucking, you can move my stuff in and start unpacking. OK? Ashley?

<… obey…>

Good. You must be so excited about having me as a roommate. Right? Ashley?

<… obey…>

I thought so. Now… of you go. I’ll take good care of Steve while you’re working…

<… obey…>

{drone fades out}