This is my first submission. I would love feedback, especially regarding length, timing, and word choice. This is much more meditative than graphic, but hopefully still sexy. Also, please let me know if there are some tags I should have that I am missing!

In this story, you’re a space explorer—a curious traveler with a lust for adventure and an openness to whatever wonders the universe contains. You set out for a small cluster of space rocks where you can observe, and experience, a most fascinating stellar phenomenon. This will be a soothing story with overtones of pleasure, arousal, and relaxation, but no physical sex. So, put on your form-fitting spacesuit, seal up your bubble helmet, and climb aboard your space scooter. It’s time to begin

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[A4A]A Cosmic Gift[SCRIPT OFFER][SCI-FI][EROTIC][RELAXATION][COSMIC][GUIDED MEDITATION]

In the heart of the Pleiades Nebula, in the constellation of Taurus, orbiting a triple star, there’s a cluster of tiny asteroids.

The largest is no larger than a house, and the smallest is no smaller than a car, and the rest are somewhere in between.

Warmed by sun and lit by the stars, it’s a place of magic solitude. Right now, you’re on your space scooter, snug in your space suit, slowly approaching those nameless asteroids.

At first they’re just faint twinkles a little brighter than the surrounding fields of stars, but as you watch them come closer, they grow.

See them in your mind’s eye. Map out their shapes and colors in your imagination as you get close enough to really look at them. Look at them.

Maybe you’re surprised that they turn out to be quite colorful. Does the pale sun tint the their little rocks and ridges in blue? Does the starlight make the shadows ripple in yellow, magenta, and green?

Is the surface soft and powdery? Or maybe they’re rounded, like stone in a pond. Or maybe yet traced by fractal lines and bands of color that tease the eye and get the mind turning in circles. It keeps your eye and mind occupied as you approach to watch them, slowly tumbling in space.

And before you know it, you’ve arrived.

Your step off your scooter and float weightless among your private cluster of asteroids. You feel faint butterflies in your stomach when you do, but it’s a pleasant feeling—the feeling of being alone in a new place, with no duties or distractions, yet somehow rich in possibility.

Think how far you are here from all your daily tasks and expectations. No one wants anything from you here. There’s nothing you have to do here, no tasks, no schedules. Your worries just float away and vanish, leaving you feeling utterly unburdened.

Empty of cares.

Freed from your scooter now, you stretch into whatever position is most comfortable, and just drift. You love this—drifting in space among the stars. You can almost hear the stars, like a faint distant music in your mind. And you love just letting go for a little while and letting the universe and your spacesuit hold you. The fabric of your spacesuit cradles you, like a nice hug or a warm blanket, holding and supporting every part of your body.

It’s quite magical, this technology. It gathers the light and energy of the stars to warm you and keep you safe. It sees to your needs yet leaves you free to move any way you need to. So that when you think about it, you feel held and safe. And when you don’t think about it, It’s like it’s not there at all.

And let’s just pause here for a moment and reflect how good that is: to go on a journey far from your cares. Just float and feel that wonderful sensation.

Just float and feel that for a moment.

Feel the pleasant tingle of your body as it relaxes even more. Notice the slow, regular pace of your breathing. How every time you breath in, your spacesuit cradles you even more. And how every time your breath out you feel more relaxed.

Breath in—feel safe and held. Breath out—more relaxed.

And if you want to pause for a moment, and even close your eyes, that’s fine too. Close your eyes for a few moments and feel what it’s like to float, warm and safe in the depths of space, among the glittering asteroids, above a majestic planet, warmed by exotic suns.

And if you feel a tinge of arousal, that’s fine too. You’re all alone out here, after all. It’s good to let your body feel what it wants to feel—good to feel aroused.

And imagine now, as you drift, that you open your eyes, and find your view is filled with stars now. A vast curtain of light, stars of all colors so that you can’t help but stare, your breath taken away. Stars of all colors; stars that burn brightly, and stars at the edge of perception, so that between every two stars you see, you find you can see more stars, and between them even more stars—an experience of infinitude that draws your mind.

And as your perception expands, your feel your imagination expand too, vast and empty, and holding all the beauty and emptiness inside it.

And as your imagination expands, your arousal expands too, brining with it a pleasing ache. But there’s an emptiness there too.

As you watch, the stars seem to dance for you. See them as they dance. And if you listen, You can even hear faint song of the cosmic rays, singing a sensual symphony as they race and spin through space, infinitely full of song and color.

And it feels good.

But that’s not all.

Deep in the Pleiades there lies a star—a mysterious star. Invisible from Earth. For millennia it has sent out its signal. Perhaps it’s the subtle receptors in your space suit, or maybe its your expanded and receptive state of mind, or maybe it’s just chance, but it calls to you.

You can see it now, crystal clear in your field of vision, faint but growing brighter. So very far away, and yet somehow right now more real than anything else, like you could almost touch it. Some stars shine in light, and some shine in x-rays. There are radio stars and gravity stars and black holes that don’t shine at all, but this star shines pleasure.

Does that seem so strange? But you can feel it now—trickling into you, trickling into that aching emptiness in your body.

Feel the glow of the pleasure star as it shines upon you. Feel it’s pleasure starting to fill you. Filling your limbs with pleasure, your thighs, your chest. And you want it to—you want to accept this gift. What does it feel like as it fills your body? Does it tingle, or hum, or throb? Maybe all three.

And the pleasure grows and surges, and it feels better and better. This is what it’s like to be bathed in the glow of a star made of pure pleasure, a pleasure that shines into you, through you, till your whole being is filled with a wave of cosmic arousal that burns away every other thought, every other sensation.

As the light glows the pleasure grows. So quickly, faster than you imagined, faster than you expected, filling you with pleasure, pleasure so you can hardly think.

And as you think you can’t take any more, can’t experience more of this please, your body starts to glow. It starts deep inside of you, but soon it fills you. Your body is glowing with the radiant arousal and joy of the pleasure star, and you lose all awareness of time, all awareness of space, as your body becomes endless wave after wave of incandescent joy and arousal blasting into the universe feeling that bliss and accept it with every atom of your being as it just goes on and on.

But alas, all to soon, it begins to wane. Slowly your body begins to fade. Your sense of time and space begins slowly to return. The light sinks out of your limbs, leaving behind a pleasing afterglow of peace and happiness.

And as you slowly return to awareness of your space suit, and your scooter, floating there as if nothing has happened, you realize you’ve been given a gift.

Bask and enjoy that for a few moments. Accept the gift of pleasure and know you’ve experienced something unique in the universe, an experience that is yours alone.

And while the pleasure star has returned to its normal brightness again, leaving no clue as to its true nature, you know. For when you have shared the glow of a pleasure star, a trace of that pleasure remains always in you—there to be awakened again, experienced again.

And the story of the pleasure star is this—you can experience pleasure, and you’re a source of it too. You have in you a gift you can share with others, and that is a joyful thought.