This script is a sequel to my earlier script Testing a Theory. In this installment, the dominant narrator crashes a party at her former bully's house and has some fun confirming a new hypothesis about her victim.

I'm still pretty new to writing scripts. I've tried to add some directions, but they are suggestions only. Please feel free to deviate from them or improvise if you wish.

If there's any interest, I have some ideas for a third and final installment in this series.

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[FX: Knocking sound]

[Optional FX: door opens and the sounds of a quiet house party, ie. people talking, maybe some quiet music]

Hiya Doll.

Surprised? You shouldn’t be. You’re the one who added me to your all your social media, right? OK, yeah… I told you to. But still…

When you didn’t show up for work tonight, I checked and found out that you were busy with an engagement party... your engagement party.

How could I resist?

To be honest, I’m kind of hurt you didn’t invite me. I mean, we’ve been hooking up after your shift in the bar for weeks now, right? You still play all hard to get, but I’m pretty sure my original theory about you was right. You know… about why you were so focused on me being a lesbian back in high school.

You know what I mean.

And I think you’ve started to look forward to our little games…

What? No? Well, your pussy does at least.

So…

Aren’t you going to invite me in?

[Stern] I’m serious, doll. Invite me in. Now!

…

[FX Optional: Door shutting]

[Happy] Good girl…

Now… where’s the lucky guy? Yeah… Brian… it’s about time Brian and I met, don’t you think? I mean, I’m kind of like [verbal air quotes] other woman, right?

What?

Oh, don’t look like that, doll. All frowny. People will notice. There… now, smile… look happy… it’s your engagement party… good girl… I’m an old friend who heard about you getting engaged and came by to say “hi”, right?

There you go… good girl… yes…

You know, you look so much better when you smile… like a happy little doll…

Good girl…

[back to business] Now, where is he. Oh…

[responding to Brian, who has approached] Hi. You must be Brian. Ashley’s told me so much about you. It’s good to meet you.

[react to Brian saying he hasn’t heard anything about her]

Oh? She hasn’t? I’m Becca… Ashley and I were uhm… well, we knew each back in high school. Yeah… we just met up again a few weeks ago, at the place she works…. And we’ve become kind of … well, close… You know…

[react to Brian saying he needs to go]

Yeah, of course. I’m sure you have lots of friends and family to talk to. Of course… it was nice to meet you too… and congratulations on the engagement. Yeah… I’ll just chat with Ash for a while… sure… OK…

See you later…

[Brian walks away]

So that’s him, huh?

[sarcastic] Your one and only.

Hey doll… let’s move over here… no… come on… [soothing] keep smiling… be a good girl, Ashley… Shhh… good girl… there, from here, we can watch the living room, but no one can see if I do….

[slips a hand under Ashley’s skirt] this…

Shhh… don’t… [stern] Don’t!

[intimate] Mmmm…. no panties, just like I told you. Good girl.

Shhh… just relax… Breath… good girl… no one will notice…

Probably.

You see, my theory about why you were such a bitch about me coming out in high school… I think I’ve proved that… no… don’t fight it… shhh….

Ohhh… you are wet, aren’t’ you? Naughty little doll.

Since you’ve been reacting so well to our little… uhm…. sessions at your bar, I have a new hypothesis I’d like to check out… and tonight was the perfect opportunity.

Shhhh… smile… people can see us… smile… be a happy little doll…

Huh… I could feel your pussy react when I said that people could see us. I really think…

[suddenly louder] Oh…. Look, there’s Brian, waving at you… you see him? Do you think he can see what we’re doing? Where my hand is? Shhhh… probably not, right? That’s it… smile… give him a wave back… maybe blow him a kiss… that’s it… good girl…

Who’s that with him?

Oh my god… is that your sister? Tammy? Fuck… she’s even hotter now than she was in high school. Wow.

[realizes what she’s seeing] Ohhh…

Shhhh…

[quiet, intense] Look at her… look at them… shhh…. Spread your legs… just a bit… good girl… let me confirm my hypothesis… good girl…

Exciting, isn’t it… watching them… together… look at the way she’s touching his arm when they talk… the way she looks right at him, so interested in every word he says… like nothing else matters… Mmm… you recognize that behavior, don’t you… Right? You’re pussy certainly does…

So… wet…

… keep watching, doll…

[whispering] We know what she wants, don’t we… say it… yes, good girl… that’s right, but she doesn’t just want him. She wants to fuck him… say it again… your sister… wants… to fuck… your fiancé…

Hmmm…. Wow! Your pussy really likes that idea….

You’re starting to look a bit… flushed doll. Someone’s going to notice. Is there somewhere private we can… ok, the bathroom will do. Lead the way, doll.

…

[FX: Door shutting; party noise fades]

There we go… all nice and private…

[businesslike] Now… pull up that skirt… let’s take a look…

Oh, wow… just like I thought… you’re soaked… can you see it? Take a look at yourself in the mirror… no, leave the skirt up… look at yourself… good girl… you’re sopping…. Right? Come on, doll… you can say it… my slutty pussy is all wet for Becca… say it…

Good girl…

Just watch… I’ll show you…

Mm…. see? My fingers… they’re all wet… from you… you want a taste?

What? Of course you do… you’ve been licking my fingers dry in the bar for weeks now… you love it, don’t you? No?

[disappointed] This again… uhm.. fine… here… I’ll just wipe them on your hair…

No… don’t pull away… BAD GIRL… stay still… be a good girl for Becca… if you won’t lick them clean, I’ll just have to wipe them on your hair… like… this… Hmmm… fuck… you’re so wet, doll… here… some more for your hair

… and your face…

… maybe a little more…

Hmm? Now you want to lick? Then ask nicely, doll. Say “Becca, please let me lick my pussy juice off your fingers.”. Say it…

Good girl… again….

Here you are, doll… Mmmm… that tastes good, doesn’t it… you want more?

Uh huh… you do? Here you go… good girl… lick it all up.

What do you say?

Awww… you’re welcome, doll. That’s so sweet.

Now, I assume you want to cum?

[laughs] Whoa… I take it that’s a yes? Good girl…

Here… I’ll just sit on the toilet… you spread your legs… good girl… sit down on my knee and rub that wet little pussy… good girl…. Good girl… just like that… feels good, doesn’t it? Mmmm… now, put your arms around me and kiss me… like you really mean it, doll… I want to feel you cumming through my…

[FX: Loud knocking!]

[speaking loudly, to someone outside the washroom] Occupied! Someone’s in here.

[whispering] It’s Brian. Shhh… keep rubbing, doll…

[speaking loudly] I’ll just be a couple of minutes. What?

[whispering] Keep humping my leg, doll. But no cumming…. Good girl…”

[speaking loudly] No, I haven’t seen her. What?

[whispering] No cumming, doll. I’m serious… shhh… just keep rubbing…. back and forth…

[speaking loudly] OK… I’ll let her know if I see her. OK.

[whispering] You hear that, doll? Sounds like Brian and Tammy are going for a beer run. Mmmm…. I wonder what they’ll get up to… just the two of them…

[more intense] Mmm… keep that thought in your head, doll… Brian and Tammy… ohhh… I see you like that.. that’s a good girl… keep rubbing… good girl… good little puppy doll…. Good girl… does puppy doll want to cum? Ask nicely…. Shhh…. Good girl… now, give Becca a kiss and then you can cum… on my lap…. Thinking about your sister and your fiancé…

[Long kiss]

[laughs]

Wow!

Good girl… I… it seems like I was right about you. Again.

Look at yourself, doll. Yeah… blonde hair all matted and sticky… face glistening with pussy juice and… what, is that drool? [laughs] And your pussy… just a second… don’t move… I’ll just…

There.

Another picture for our little collection. I’ll send it to you…

No, I told you. Be a good girl and this is just between us, isn’t it doll?

You’re going to be a good girl, right?

[menacing] Right?

Awww… of course you are.

[businesslike] So… I have a real party to get to, so I’ll be on my way. Sounds like your fiancé and sister will be a while, so you can stay here, in the bathroom for a bit… if you want… But no cumming, right? If my doll wants to cum, she texts and asks permission.

Am I clear?

Good girl.

OK, well… have fun. Enjoy the rest of your engagement party. And say hi to Tammy for me when she and Brian get back.

See you soon.