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“Are you horny, baby?” you asked. “Does sucking... my big fat cock... make you horny?”
I began to pull away, nodding and gasping as I start to answer, but you grabbed the back of my head with one hand, freezing me in place.
“Don't \ look * at me,” you said. “Just say it. Just say, 'sucking your big fat cock makes me horny.' Go on.”*
I wanted you to like me.
I wanted you to like me so bad.
I wanted your cock to crave me as much as I'd craved it.
And, sucking your big fat cock made me horny.
Performance Notes: Is this a year later? Five years? Ten? Play it however you'd like. Just give her her moment of awesome, in the end, because goddammit, she's earned SOMETHING.
Author's Notes: This is dark and heavy and has a “happy” ending by the skin of my teeth. This was originally inspired by several sources: a couple of scripts that I loved from the other night cavorted around in my brain and the first draft of this popped out in forty-five minutes.
I then spent the next several HOURS agonizing over the incredibly horrible ending for our hero. You'll know exactly where the original ending was.
I don't like easy answers, easy solutions or easy endings, not if I want my protagonists to prove their worth. On my second or third pass of line clean-up, she said exactly what I needed to hear to get an ending I'm not going to agonize over.
As always, a fantasy of adults, for adults.
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