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There are a lot of hot fantasies floating around GWA, but in this script the 'fantasy' is just that the listener... actually gets to have sex if he wants to. Our heroine has noticed that her new boyfriend tends to wait for her to initiate sex - despite being obviously horny. Determined to see him satisfied, she employs some not-at-all-subtle tactics to let the listener know that when he wants sex, he can just... ask for it.
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This script is actually two. Usually by the time I start writing I have a big-picture idea in mind, and also a few specific lines/actions/etc. I write those down straight away, and can usually get a script to coalesce around them. This time, though, I ended up with two distinct approaches to the same concept, and couldn't decide which I liked better - so I just wrote both.
They're similar in theme, tone, and tags. Both have the same ending, and that ending is flexible. (Also, if you find that it's *too* flexible for your liking, let me know and I'll be happy to write you something more direct.) Both hinge on the speaker using a casual approach to sex to make her boyfriend feel like it's safe to just ask for what he wants. Both are shorter, ~600-700 words.
Below find a snippet of each, along with a brief summary of the differences
Option 1 (A little more faux-casual, she tries to be subtle for like half a second. Face-fucking):
[Said in an intentionally, overly casual tone] Okay, well. It's a beautiful day out; let me know if you want to take a break to go for a walk, or fuck my face, or something. Oo, maybe we can get brunch in a bit.
[Still in the too-casual tone] Hmm? I said we could get brunch. Oh, the face-fucking thing? Yeah..? I mean, I was just listing some options. Brunch. Blowjobs. Whatever.
Option 2 (A little more direct. Much of the opening dialogue is interspersed with a blowjob. Sweeter, one L-bomb, no face-fucking)Â :
[...]it doesn't matter really, we're usually both plenty horny, and I initiate, and it's fine. But the other day you did, and then you said that thing, about how it's nice to feel like you actually, y'know, get to have sex, when you want it... and that got me thinking, about how you don't always express what you want.
So I just. I want you to know you can.
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(I've forgotten to add this to the last several scripts I've posted, but a couple notes:-changes/deviations are always fine with me-I'm also generally happy to help you rewrite if there's something you want to change, a tag you want to add/remove, etc.-I'm always looking to improve, so if you have any constructive feedback I'd love to hear it! In particular with these scripts I was challenging myself to write something shorter that still got the point across; let me know if I missed the mark)
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