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So a while back I was thinking about waterfalls. I was thinking about waterfalls, and how long it would take to fall down one, and how high a waterfall one could reasonably fall down - and then I stopped, um, thinking. Because I figured I was, maybe, over-thinking it (blush). So I gave up on the thinking, but kept the waterfall - and my fingers itched, I guess, and this is sort of what happened. I say sort of, because originally I did a Male perspective of it, and then posted a Female perspective. And some folks liked it, and two of them (yes, you know who you are Lady Raven and Lord Bear :-P) liked it, but wanted to do both perspectives. So I scribbled together the Male and Female perspectives into a shared one - call it, I guess, a Collaboration. And here it is :-). If it hath any merit to thee, it's thine to to use as ye will :-). And if it doesn't - I'd say 'must try harder', but round here, that could be misinterpreted :-). Oh - and that amazing Raven/ Bear Reading? It's over here :-))):
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http://www.reddit.com/r/gonewildaudio/comments/2k2a5w/mf4afalling_to_lovescriptfillby/
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FALLING TO LOVE (C)
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[M F]
We're fifty feet up the cliff, and we're there. The vines are thick.
[M]
When I first showed it to you, I said we should call it the Veil.
[F]
I remember. And I took one look through the vines, I climbed in and looked up, and I said the hell with that. I said the vines were the fucking Pussy, and it is.
[M]
Yes, it is. And we're here again. I guess we're always here. Because... well, because. We're here, the sun's saying goodbye to the sky – and it's time.
[M F]
It's time to Fall.... [PAUSE]
So we push into the Pussy.
[M]
And like every time, I'm so very damn hard.
[F]
And like every time, my cunt is already so fucking wet.
[M]
And just like every time, you drop your hand, and you grab hold of my cock, and you grin at how hard I am.
[F]
But we've got climbing to do, so I let go, and we push into the Pussy, and we don't climb into the Elevator, because I said that was a dumb name.
[M]
And you were right. So we push through the Pussy, and we're in the Cunt.
[F]
And I look look up, all sixty foot of tight, close and hot, and I say what I say every time. I say 'Fuck it – let's fuck it.'
[M]
And we slide in. And the Cunt's tight, and we're close, so very close, and your breasts flatten on my chest, and your nipples are as hard as my cock. And I make sure my footholds are good, and I brace my back against the wall.
[F]
And I work your way up some, and I ease myself onto you, and the Cunt is tight, and it's a hard climb, and we're in it, and my cunt is tight, and your cock is hard, and you're in me. And I raise one foot, and find a new hold, and I raise my other foot, and I find a hold, and I slide my back up the chimney, and I lift – maybe an inch, maybe three. And my cunt slides up along you cock, maybe an inch, maybe three. And my tits slide up your chest, my nipples dragging your skin like they're burning diamonds, and you're even harder inside me. And I stop, and I brace, and I grin – and I wait.
[M]
And I lift one foot, and I find a hold, and I lift my other foot, and I find another hold, and I push on my feet, and I lift, maybe an inch, maybe two. And your breasts slide on my chest, on our sweat, and your nipples burn me, and my cock drives into you again until I'm buried in you – and we climb.
[F]
And sometimes my breasts lift so high as I slide onto you that my nipple teases close to my lips. So I lower my head, and my mouth opens, and I slide my tongue out, and I lick my nipple. And I lick it, I slide onto you that my nipple teases close to my lips. So I lower your head, and open my mouth, and I slide my tongue out, and I lick my nipple. And I lick it, and I can see you watching my tongue, and I lick, and I let my r nipple slide into my mouth, and I suck it. I suck it, and I smile – and I show you my nipple tight between my teeth, and I close my teeth on it as I bite. And the bite is wonderful, and the pain is delicious – and I gasp, and feel my cunt tighten on you. And I want to come, but it's not time for that yet, and that's part of what we do, why we're here – so I hold it back. And it's hard, like you're so very hard.
[M]
And I watch you suck your nipple – watch you bite it – and I wish I was sucking it. Wish I was biting it. And my cock gets so very, very hard, and for sixty feet of Cunt, I thrust into you, and you slide off me, I thrust into you and you slide back, an inch at a time, or maybe three – and we fuck the cliff, we fuck the world, we fuck the Cunt – and we fuck each other.
[M F]
But we don't come, even though it's hard not to. Because it's not time for that – not yet. But no fuck lasts forever, not even the Cunt. And at the top, we climb out, and the sun's even further down the sky, and the sky is burning like our backs are burning, and our feet are burning.
[M]
And my cock is burning, and I''m still so very, very fucking hard.
[F]
And my cunt is sore, but so wonderfully sore, and so. Fucking. Wet.
[M]
And for a moment you kiss me, or maybe I kiss you.
[F]
And my tongue is in your mouth and you suck it, like I wish I was sucking my cock.
[M]
And you're licking my tongue like I wish I was licking your clit.
[M F]
And the sky is burning round us, as we burn in it. But it's only a moment.
[M]
Because I pull away.
[F]
Or maybe I do.
[M F]
And we grin. Maybe because we remember why we're here, and maybe just because not grinning on top of the world surrounded by a sky on fire would be crazy. But what goes up gets to go down, and we've got some going down we're both so very ready for. So we grin, and we grab each others hands – then we let go, and we run. Because it's a long mile before we can fall into Love.
[M]
And I figure I must look pretty dumb, running with my rock hard cock bouncing up and down with every step, my balls slapping my cock. But you always tell me it's cute.
[F]
And I figure I must look pretty dumb too, running with my tits bouncing up and down with every step. But you always tell me you like looking, so I bounce them a little more. And every now and then I see you looking sideways at my tits bouncing, so I slap at your cock. But I grin, and it's just part of why we're here.
[M F]
And we run, and the sun slides down the sky, and we run – and we're gasping and the air is burning in my lungs – and we're there. We're there, and the river is ten feet below us, and we should stop, and we should think, and we should plan – but love's not like that, and neither are we. So we just keep running, and we hit the edge together, and we plunge together, gulping air as we fall, and we're straight, and we fall, and we cut into the deep water like a knife into butter.
[M]
And the cold water burns my back where the Cunt's rock scraped it, and the water's cold, and I should be soft – but I'm not. Because I'm so very hard.
[F]
And my back burns too, and there's so much wet I can;t tell where the river ends and my cunt begins – where you end and I begin. But that's part of love too.
[M F]
And the current's fast, and the current's hard, and we're so close to being out of control it's madness – and that's love most of all. But we find each other, because there's no time to do anything else.
[M]
And your arms wrap round my shoulders.
[F]
And my legs wrap round your waist, and I pull you to me.
[M]
And you pull, and my cock finds your cunt again, and you pull, and I thrust, and I'm in you.
[M F]
And our mouths are one mouth, and our tongues are one tongue, and our lips burn each other, and we kiss tight and hard, because it's now and it's always – and we do it. We hit the waterfall, and we go over the edge.
[M]
And all the way down I'm in you.
[F]
And all the way down my cunt is tight round your cock.
[M F]
And we're so close and we're so ready, and we fall, and we hit the water together, the pool we had to call Love the first time we did this. And it's deep, and it's madness, and it's crazy –
[M]
But I feel your cunt tighten and spasm.
[F]
And I feel your cock jerk and thrust –
[M F]
And we come. We come so very, very fucking hard. And we scream our last breaths into each others lungs as we come, and we taste each other, and we breathe each other – and we live each other. Until we rise to the surface, and we roll to our backs, we reach out in the water and hold hands. And hands tight held, we drift downstream, the current our cushion.
[M]
And there isn't a single star in the sky I'd trade for the ones in your eyes.
[F]
And there isn't a day of my life I had without you in it that I wouldn't I'd trade for this moment with you.
[M F]
And we drift, and the sun slides from the sky, and the stars come clearer, and the river bend gets close, so we kick to the shore. And we climb from the river. But the grass is soft, and the grass is green, and we're wet, much more than the river's wet.
[M]
So you pull me down.
[F]
And I slide down to your cock. And I take you in my mouth, and I begin to tease, to lick, and to suck. And I can feel you getting hard. I can feel you reaching for my throat. So I push my head onto you.
[M]
And you twist, and you spin, and your legs are either side of my head, and your cunt is open and waiting for my tongue, and I thrust into your cunt as my cock thrusts into your face. And I lick, and I tease, and I suck on your clit, and I reach up to your ass, and I open you, and I slide my finger into your ass and begin to fuck it.
[F]
And my lips tighten on your cock, like my cunt is tight on your tongue and my asshole is tight on your finger.
[M F]
And it isn't inches and it isn't moments, because it's the sky wheeling round us, and it's forever. And we suck, and we thrust, and we gasp and we moan – and we flood each others mouths again. And we lie on our backs, and the sky and the stars wheel round us – until we get to unsteady feet, and we grab shaking hands, and we walk home. Because the river's fine, and falling into Love again is more than fine – but there's a fire burning at home, and home isn't far, and we've more dreaming to do. So we head for dreams – but we know we never really leave our pool, and we know we'll be back – because it's never too late, and it's never too many times, to fall into Love.
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