I wrote this last night after a suggestion from the same friend that has encouraged me to share my writing. I think it turned out pretty well. The premise is a Mommy is worried about her boy, and invites a friend over who is a doctor to check him out. This one could be done by two people, but the 'doctor' has a much bigger role.

As with most of my writing, I add a little camera direction as well as some feeling behind some of the scenes. Hope you like it! If anybody has suggestions or scenes they would like to see, please let me know. I am always looking for inspiration!

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[The doorbell rings and Mommy walks over to answer the door][Mommy]

*Muffled* Hi Christine. Thank you so much for coming over. I really appreciate it. He’s just so nervous to go to the doctor, but I feel like he needs to be checked out.

[Christine] It’s no problem!

[Mommy] Please, come in. He’s waiting in the living room. I got out my massage table like you asked.

[Christine] Perfect! It’ll be much easier with a table for him to be on. So tell me again what’s going on?

[Mommy] Well, he’s been complaining the last couple weeks about stomach pain and that his…testicles…have been sore.

[Christine] Hmmm, ok. And has he mentioned anything else? Any other pains?

[Mommy] No, he hasn’t said anything to me. But when he kept complaining about the same things, I knew he had to see a doctor. As a mother, I don’t want my boys…manhood…to be damaged!

[Christine] I totally understand. We’ll get him looked at.*Entering the room*

[Mommy] Sweetie? You remember Mommy’s friend right, Mrs. Smith? She’s a doctor and she’s going to check you out, ok? She’s going to see if she can help your….pain go away.

*Mommy goes to sit on the couch as Dr. Christine approaches*

[Christine] Hi there! Remember me? Im you’re Mommy’s friend, Doctor Smith. I met you when you were teeny tiny! You’ve grown up so much. *Smiling*

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You’re Mommy told me that you’ve been feeling a little uncomfortable. Is that right? It is? Aw, I’m sorry. Can you tell me a little bit about what’s been bothering you?

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You’re stomach has been achy? Ok. Like you’re going to throw up?

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Kinda but not really? *Giggle* Ok. Is there anything else?

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It’s ok, you can say that. Your balls feel sore? Hmmmm, that is concerning isn’t it? Well I’m here now and I’ll do my best to help you feel better, ok?

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Ok. I am going to start by doing a general checkup. Listen to your heart, your lungs, that sort of thing, ok? You let me know if anything is uncomfortable.

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[Dr. Christine starts to do a general checkup. Listening to your heart, looking at your eyes, looking in your ears.]

*Quiet, soft spoken* Ok, that all looks good. Say Ah…..Good. Now breath in….good….and out…good boy.

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Your Mommy told me you play soccer? Yeah? I can tell! Your heart and lungs sound very good. Everything looks normal so far *Smile*Ok, I am going to check out…down there. Is that ok? Yeah?

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I understand. It’s ok to be nervous. But you don’t have to be scared of me. I just want you to feel better.

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You’re nervous of…your Mommy? Do you not want her to see you naked?…

[Mommy] *Interrupting* Oh baby, Mommy…..

[Christine] *Signaling to Mommy she’s got it* Would you like your Mommy to leave the room? No? It’s ok that she stays? Ok.

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Let’s get you up on the table so I can get a better look at you ok? Climb on up.

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*Camera is now laying down looking up at Dr. Christine*[

Christine] Ok little one. Can I take your shirt off? Yeah? Ok, lift your arms up….there we go! Wow! Look how strong your are! *Smiling*

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Just relax. I am going to feel around your stomach. You tell me if anything feel uncomfortable.*Begins examination. Softly under breath* That all…feels good. Do you have any tenderness here? No? How about over here? No? Good.*Going lower on the abdomen* How about when I push here? No? You’re doing great.

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How about here by your hips? No, still nothing? Ok good.

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I’m going to check your….privates….is that ok? Yeah? *Giggling* Oh don’t be nervous. I see boys like you alllll the time. There’s nothing to be worried about. Here…I’m just going to sliiiiiiiiide your pants down….

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*Smile* Oh wow! Look at you.

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No no, you are perfectly normal.

[Mommy] *From the couch* Sweetheart, nothing is wrong with your…peepee….

[Christine] Your Mommy is right. You are perfectly normal. Some boys develop really early and their body starts to mature. Other boys take a little longer and they stay….small….like a baby….for longer.

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But it is absolutely normal. However….

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Your….testicles….do look somewhat….swollen. I’m just going to feel down there a bit, ok? Ok.

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Oh, I’m sorry *GIggle* I know, my hands are a little cold. I’ll try to warm them up. Better? Good. Ok, let me just feel….

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*Soft noises* Is that sensitive? Yeah? When I do this? Yeah? Hmmmmm. How about here? Yeah? Ok…..

*Turning to Mommy, softly* If you don’t mind, I’d like to check his….backside….

[Mommy] *Softly* Oh yes, of course! Is everything ok?…

[Christine] Yes, nothing too alarming. I just want to make sure.

*Back to the boy* Ok sweetheart, can you flip over for me? Yes, onto your stomach. Your ‘balls’ are a little swollen and tender, and I want to check one more thing.

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Come on, flip over….That’s it. Good boy.

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I am going to check your bum, ok? It may feel a little different at first, but I just need you to relax.

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*Slowly feeling his little cheeks* Just relaxxxxx. Take deep breaths for me. Thats it….

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Anddddd there we go. I know, I know. It feels funny. Just relax.

[Mommy} It’s ok baby. Listen to Christine. Relax and it will be over soon.

[Christine] Thats it. Good boy. I am just going to move my finger around a bit…

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See? That doesn’t feel so bad does it? Hmmmm. Interesting. Mom, do you want to come over here for a second?

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*Very softly* Do you see….

[Mommy] Oh…OH my!….

[Christine] Mhmmmm. And when I do….this…..how it's growing?...

[Mommy] Oh wow….yes, I see what’s happening….

[Christine] *Normal* Well done sweetie. I’m going to remove…my finger. And you’re done. Just stay there for a second, ok?*Softly* So everything seems normal. His vitals are normal, everything sounds and looks good. I don’t feel any lumps or abrasions. However, his testicles ARE swollen. I think the cause of his uncomfort is….he’s….’backed up’…..

[Mommy] Really? That is not what I was expecting.

[Christine] Yes. He’s getting to that age. And if he’s not getting relief….*Normal* Little one, do you know what ‘masturbation’ is? No? *Softly* Yeah, if he isn’t relieving himself, it could get uncomfortable. Which is what’s happening.

[Mommy] What do you suggest we do? I don’t want him feeling uncomfortable.

[Christine] Well, he is going to need to….’empty’ himself somehow. Maybe it’s time he learned…

[Mommy] I don’t know that I’m ready for that! He seems so…small…and innocent!

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Plus, how is he going to learn?

[Christine] Well, maybe you should show him….

[Mommy] WHAT?! I am his Mother….I couldn’t.

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Christine, would you be willing to….help me…help him? Please! I know it’s a little strange but….

[Christine] *Reluctant* I suppose I can. Medically he does need to be relieved.

[Mommy] Thank you, thank you! I owe you big time.

[Christine] *Normal* Ok, can you flip over for me again sweetie? Good boy….No, no don’t cover up.

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The reason you have been feeling…uncomfortable…is because your testicles, or your ‘balls,’ are very very full. See, as you get older, you start to develop sperm. And if you keep making sperm without releasing any, you can get built up and start to ache.

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So I am going to teach you how to get that out, ok? Is it ok if I touch you again? Ill be gentle.

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So what you want to do is…take your hand…or a couple fingers….just like this…and you lightly grasp onto your….peepee. Like that. Do you see? And then while you are lightly grabbing it, you move upppp…..and downnnnn. Nice and slow like that.

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And when you do that, your little peepee will start to grow! Just like it is right now! *Giggle*

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Oh don’t be shy. This is a perfectly natural and nor….what was that?

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You….you don’t want me to do it? It feels weird? Do you want to try it?….No?

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Do you want your Mommy to do it? You do?…..Mommy?

[Mommy] Honey. You don’t want Dr. Christine to help you? No? Sweetie I think it would be better if sh…..

[Christine] Mommy! He's in pain! *Smiling, slightly teasing*

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[Mommy]…Ok then. I guess Mommy can help you.

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There sweetheart. Does that feel better? It does? Good. Mommy will just lightly touch your little peepee.

[Christine] *Devlishly* There you go Mommy. Up and down.

[Mommy] *Smiling and softly* Shut up!…..*Normal* Nothing sweetie. Just close your eyes and relax.

[Christine] Mommy will take care of everything *Smiling*

[Mommy] Yes, Mommy will take care of everything. Just relaxxxxxx. Feel Mommy’s soft hands going up and down. Up and down on your little peepee. Your little…boner.

[Christine] *Softly* And it IS little!….

[Mommy] Shush! *Giggling* Nothing honey...Does that feel good? Good. Just relax. Good boy. Mommy’s baby boy.

[Christine] Show your baby boy how much you love him.

[Mommy] *Smiling back at Christine* Mommy loves you so much baby. Stroking you up. And down. Up. And down.

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Yeah? It’s feeling funny? Good funny?

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Good honey. Thats how its supposed to feel when you touch your little peepee. Mommy is going to speed up a little, ok?

[Christine] Maybe you should use your mouth?…

[Mommy] No! Stop it *Smiling* Thats it baby. Feel Mommys hands. Up and down. Up and down.

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[Christine] Look at how hard that little cock is!

[Mommy] He’s so hard isn’t he?! Yes baby, you’re so hard for Mommy. Such a big boy. Is it feeling better? Yeah? Good, Mommy is going to keep going, a little faster.

[Christine] I have an idea….

[Mommy] Christine, what are you doing?….

[Christine] Just keep stroking your sons cock ‘Mommy.’ I am going to help…

[Mommy] Christine! Don’t touch him there! He won’t like your fingers……

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[Christine] His little moans say different. *Smiling*

[Mommy] Did….does that feel…..it feels good sweetie? Are you sure?….

[Christine] Come on Mommy. You go up and down. I’ll go in…and out….

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[Mommy] What’s that honey? You feel what?

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Like you’re going to go potty? No, just relax baby. Thats ok. You don’t really have to go potty, it just feels that way. If you have to go ‘potty,’ you just go. Feel Mommy…and Dr. Christine's...hands. Up and down. Up and down. Good boy.

[Christine] Mmmmmm, good boy.

[Mommy] Thats it baby. Come on! Go ‘potty’ for Mommy and Dr. Christine. Thats it!

[Christine] Mmmmmm, that IS it. Cum for your Mommy.

[Mommy] *Side eyeing Christine with a smile* Thats it baby. Yeah? You’re going to go potty? Do it! Potty for Mommy. Go on!

[Christine] *Softly* Omg this is so hot…

[Mommy] Yes baby! Go potty! Potty for Mommy……ohhhhhhhhhh wow. Keep going. Keep going. Get it all out.

[Christine] ….holy shit….

[Mommy] Thats it baby! Goooood boy. Yes, potty all over yourself. Mmmmmm good boy! Is that it?……*Mommy and Christine slow remove their hands*

[Mommy] Do you feel better after that baby? Good….

[Christine] Well are you going to clean him up, ‘Mommy’? *Smiling*

[Mommy] Oh my gosh…One second baby. You stay there and Mommy will be back to clean you up. *Softly to Christine as she is pushing her out, giggling* You are ridiculous. Thank you so much for your help and your….help.

[Christine] It was my ‘pleasure.’ Maybe I should come back every couple weeks for a check up.

[Mommy] You’re terrible!

[Christine] *As she is being pushed out the door* So I’ll put you both on the schedule? Next Tuesday?

[Mommy] *Laughing, pushing her out*….yes, put us on the schedule...

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