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Synopsis: Wandering through the city looking for somewhere to get a drink, you come across a strange-looking bar called "Hell's Beach" with a sign on the front door that reads: NO HUMANS. You chuckle to yourself at the joke. This place seems quite unique. Just what you were after. Somewhat tentatively, you push open the door...
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Hi GWA! Hope you're having a suitably sinful evening. I'm not sure what to say about this other than: thank God Dark Lord it's finished. I'm sorry about how long this ended up being. I've tried to trim it down a bit (the first draft was closer to 8000 words), but I'm aware there's probably more that needs to go. There was actually a bunch more stuff I wanted to put in. I ended up cutting a whole load of lore and story bits for Lilith and I had planned out a whole segment for Ruth at the end as well. There's definitely room for a part 2 here and I certainly will be revisiting this concept and probably some of these characters too in the future. I'd appreciate any feedback on this. I can always make changes if they're needed. Anyway, I'm pretty happy with what I created in the end and I hope you enjoy!
Any suggestions or constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.
If you enjoy my take on the succubus, try these other two:
"I'm totally not a Cumaholic!" Helping your succubus girlfriend with her Cum Addiction Part 2
Helping your succubus girlfriend with her Cum Addiction Part 1
Or check out my last script:
Kidnapped, Robbed and Raped by a Yandere Highwaywoman
Or check out my profile to see everything I've written.
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