This is my first fiction writing, so let me me what you think. This is inspired by a time I was propositioned by a guy to have a 3some with him and his partner. I really got excited about the possibility, but they flaked out

First, about me. I'm a heteroromamtic bi guy. I don't act on it very often, but when i get the itch, I really enjoy meeting up with a fun guy to have some fun. So I posted an ad on doublelist looking for a top to have some fun with. I got a couple of replies, but nothing that interested me. Then this one guy replied with a nice cock pick. He said that he and his boyfriend wanted to do a 3some and wanted to know if I was interested. I was intrigued right off the bat as the possibilities, and mental images developed in my mind. So I replied yes and asked what they were looking for. Matt (the one who replied to my ad) said that he was a top only. He had a nice 7 in cut cock and a medium build. Patrick was verse, had a 6 in cock and had a dad bod. I explained that I was an oral bottom and only played safe. We were all cool with kissing and body contact. We are all in agreement and set up a time.

On the day of our date I was prepared. I had just got a Brazilian wax a couple days before, showered, ad cleaned myself inside and out. I drive over to their place, nervous and excited at the same time. I ring the doorbell. Matt opened the door, greeted me, abs invited me in. Patrick was on the couch and stood up to greet me. We all sit down and start to talk. After a few minutes, Matt who was sitting next to me on the big sectional couch, slid closer to me. He looked at Patrick and asked if we could get started. Patrick nodded with a smile. That's when Matt leaned in and started to kiss me. I leaned back into the couch as he made out with me, one of his hands on my thigh. Patrick got on his knees and made his way to us. I couldn't see him as my eyes were closed as I made I with Matt, but I felt Patrick's hands run up the inside of my thighs and pushed my legs apart. His hands met on my crotch applying pressure there momentarily before running up under my shirt abs onto my skin. This sent shivers all over me and gave me goosebumps. It also started to get me hard.

Matt didn't let up the tongue wrestling we were doing, but his hand found my shirt that was being pulled up and ran his hand across the skin on my chest too. Matt then broke our kiss and pulled my shirt over my head. Patrick went to the top of my running pants and started pulling them down. I let them undress me fully. Once my pants were off, Patrick went right to my now hard cock. He a still on his knees between my legs. He gripped it in his hand and started to lick up my shaft and I let out a moan. I was reaching for Matt's cock and feeling his bulge through his shorts. Then Matt stood up and started to undress fully. I watched him as he undressed while feeling Patrick lick my shaft up and down. As Matt's shorts dropped, his half hard cock was swaying back and forth. Then I felt my cock slide into Patrick's mouth. I rested my left hand on his neck as he slid his mouth up and down my cock. I was loving the feeling of his experienced warm mouth and tongue.

Matt then climbed up on the couch on his knees, placing his cock right at my mouth. I reached up abs grabbed the base of his half hard cock and guided him into my mouth. I was in heaven. Never have I been in the scenario and I wanted to savor every moment of it. I could feel Matt's cock hardening in my mouth. One of my favorite things to feel when sucking cock. I stroked him a I sucked, moaning with my mouth full as Patrick worked me over.

This went on for a few minutes. Matt was moaning, I was moaning, and Patrick was putting me on edge. That's when Matt pulled away and told me to get on my knees on the couch and so I did. Matt got up and Patrick moved to where Matt was but was sitting down with one leg between the back of the couch and myself and the other leg down on the floor. His legs spread to give me better access to start sucking him. Once he was in position, I crawled up, grabbed his soft cock and started to lick his balls and limp shaft. Matt got behind me, spread my ass cheeks and leaned in. I could feel his breath on my cheeks as he spread them. Then I felt his tongue lick me from balls to hole. He worked his tongue in circles and up and down. I continued to moan in acceptance and had to also concentrate on Patrick in front of me. His cock was starting to get chub up, so I sucked him into my mouth. I wanted to feel him get hard on my mouth as well.

Matt kept licking me and would push his tongue into my ass. As he pushed his tongue into me, he would also push my onto the cock in my mouth. Then Matt stood up and told me to keep sucking that cock on my mouth. He went to the end table abs grabbed the lube and a condom. He got back behind me and spread lube over my hole. Then he pushed a finger in and started working it in and out of me. When he pulled his finger out, he opened the condom slid it over his cock. Then I felt the head of his cock rubbing up and down the crack of my ass. As he would slide up, he would pause and slightly push up into my hole. ......

Should I continue? I would love some honest feedback. If it's good, I'll finish it.

Thanks for reading!