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Would it be jarring for readers if two characters meet then immediately split up and then team up again?
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So in the first chapter of my novel I just started writing my MC meets a girl in the woods. He first thinks she's a hallucinations since she just appears out of nowhere essentially. Then in chapter two she leaves again after another argument, this is about a day after the initial meeting, but then they meet up again by the end of the chapter or early in the next.

Was just wondering if it would be better for more time in between them meeting and breaking up, or if it's fine as it is.

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