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Writing a fantasy book, first time and not gunna go to much into it here right now but I am needing some advice. The main character, having lost his parents and family wants to join an organization that his father was apart of. Think of the organization as like fantasy rangers but different. Soo I wrote it that he was allowed to train with the recruits, even tho he is to young to out in. He would be allowed to train until he came of age and was tested. But a part of me is curious if that sounds to odd and it would be better writing to have him trained by his adopted mother until he becomes of age.

In the book those who wish to be apart of the organization have to be tested and if they pass have 2 years of trianing then a year of apprenticeship. So what do you all think? Keep in mind very much a fantasy world.

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