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Read the previous parts here: - https://www.reddit.com/r/EroticWriting/s/vr7SvmDPC (pt1) - https://www.reddit.com/r/EroticWriting/s/C4ltBh2f1H (pt2) - https://www.reddit.com/r/EroticWriting/s/yNbPnXiWl3 (pt3) - https://www.reddit.com/r/EroticWriting/s/hmeFSMXSOs (pt4) - https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/s/ZjDfPj3LF0 (pt5)
I highly suggest reading the previous versions, as it's getting a bit harder to follow if you haven't read them. But it's your life, if you want to read this first then go ahead.
The bell rings. Ugh. You step out of bed, leaving David and his fantastic body behind. You put a shirt on and walk downstairs to greet Lucy. God, this is getting too much for your small appartement. Three girls getting pounded in that small room of yours - if you convince Lucy, that is.
The feelings of jealousy you had earlier with Alice are gone entirely. You don't know why. It seems his fucking... changes you, in some way.
Yesterday and before, you would only get this fog of arousal covering your rational thoughts during the pounding. Now it seems the fog stays for much langer after every session.
You also seem to crave his cock - both of them at once is a unique pleasure you've never experienced before - even more than before. You also feel more... like you want to be used, like you want to obey him and be his little fuckdoll. But... you kind of enjoy that feeling.
A second ring of the bell snaps you back to reality. You open the door. - "Omg, hi!" she says as she hugs you. You smile and hug her back. You get immediately walk upstairs with her and knock on the door of your room.
- "Alice is already inside, but she was... changing" you lie. She nodds and looks around a bit while knock again. You shrug. She was sleeping a moment ago, so she's probably just asleep...
The moment you enter, you know you're in trouble. Alice is laying flat out on your bed with her legs spread - entirely naked - and David is eating her out - you hear the sound of his tongue licking her beautiful lips.
Lucy drops her suitcase and puts her hands on her mouth. Her eyes are big in surprise. - "What is this..." she says, but a big alarm in your head goes off when the licking sound stops. You know David. He will take Lucy and make her his.
You grab her arm and say: "maybe it's better you come back some other time." You try to push her out of the room, but it's too late. Her face turns from surprise into an aroused blush; David is letting his godly fingers slide on the place she likes most.
Her gaze becomes blurry with pleasure and unfocused and she drops on her knees. Her shirt gets ripped away by his invisible hands and her breasts softly bounce. Oh well. It's too late anyway. You crouch and start caressing her breasts while you press your lips softly onto hers.
Her eyes shortly focus on your face in surprise, but then they turn back as David enters her with one of his penises. She shivers in pleasure and falls on top of you.
--- Alice POV ---
You slowly get back to your normal senses. But it's not for long. Harper and Lucy are having what seems to be the best threesome ever! You try form rational thoughts - what kind of depraved thing is this - but they shatter immediately. You want some too.
You crawl out of bed and throw yourself onto them. Your bare skin touches yours, and the amount of sensations overwhelm you. Mouths, a penis, fingers, breasts everywhere. An ass appears in front of you and you violently bury your face in it.
Moaning and the smell of sweat and other bodily liquids fills the room. You get penetrated deep. You kiss someone - it's too dark to see if it's Lucy or Harper. Your heart starts racing. The climax is not far away - even though you came a minute ago, right when Harper entered with Lucy.
--- Ghost POV ---
You look down at the entangled, sweaty, horny pile of women. You're fucking them all 3 and it feels unlike anything you've ever felt. Having sex with Harper seems like a warm up compared to this.
Your climax is coming. Oh my god, why are they so wet, so tight, so warm?! Your dicks are in their natural habitats, they pulsate as you slam them in and out of these hungry cunts.
The orgasm is extraordinary. Cum shoots inside their wombs and the aphrodisiac is administered with it. Right after your orgasm, you feel Lucy cum. The 3rd time in one session!
I mean, she just recieved you in your most powerful state for the first time, no wonder she came 3 times during a pounding that lasted not longer than a couple minutes. You pat their heads.
Then, you feel the change. But it's not a normal change. You feel an explosion within you. You become lighter. More lucid. Your thoughts slowly fade. You don't even get the chance to pull out; you un-materialise and float upwards, through the ceiling, to the sky.
Everything goes black...
Until you wake up. In some kind of cloud. A female figure with a weird yellow ring above her head is slapping your cheeck to wake you.
- "What..." you manage to mumble. She smiles.
"Finally. You're unique. You get to go back..."
--- Lucy POV ---
What the fuck was that? What. The. Fuck?!
That felt amazing... but now, after the night, you feel normal again. Harper however is much worse. The hours after 'it' left - you call it that because you don't know anything else - she went mad. Yelling, crying, and throwing stuff around. She begged for 'David', whoever that was.
She looked like a crackhead trying to go clean. You didn't know what to do, so you brought her to the hospital, and you haven't heard anything since. Alice was much better with it though, she didn't say a word, but you heard her silently cry in her sleep this night.
You have made her breakfast. You don't have time to stay long though; you have an important client to take care of. He reportedly crashed his car into a tree, and sued the car company for the technical issues that caused the crash...
Note: I enjoyed writing this story but it's done now. I feel like I got everything out of the plot that I could and further parts would only be repetitive and boring. Thanks for reading - comment your opinion and any feedback, and... cheers!
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