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The Gardenia Submission
Note: Chapters I-III are linked here:Â click me
Chapter IV: The Commands
Heather climbed onto the bed and lay down on her back. Alex had started towards her, but now he stopped and considered. âGet up on your hands and knees, and turn around so that your head is at the bottomâ he told her. She obeyed instantly, wondering what he had in mind. Alex laid back on the bed and scooted, 69 position, under her until his face had kissed and tongued his way down to her cunt. She felt his strong hands grab her ass cheeks and pull her cunt down onto his face.
As she spread her legs, thereby lowering herself onto his mouth, she felt his tongue sneak up and caress her pussy lips. An uncontrollable groan escaped her, and she closed her eyes, longing for more. She felt him pull her even tighter to his mouth, and reveled in the feel of his lips, his goatee, and his tongue working wonders on her clit. She was lost in the moment, and suddenly realized that his cock was right in front of her, begging for a little oral action too.
She reached for his cock and immediately wrapped her lips around his manhood. Alex groaned, paused momentarily from his pussy eating and then said âDonât. Iâll tell you when you can suck me off again, but for now you can only masturbate me slowly. As long as you keep me hard, Iâll keep eating this incredible, wet pussy of yours. But if you canât keep me hard, or if you make me cum, then thatâs it for the night â I wonât touch your pussy this way again tonight. Understand?â She nodded and whispered, âYes Sirâ
Heather realized that she had just been given an almost impossible task. She was to keep him constantly hard, on the edge of cumming, but not allow him to climax? No sucking? She wanted him in her mouth like she wanted nothing else! But she also needed her pussy eaten. If she screwed up in either task, then that was it for that hot, wet tongue between her legs. How the hell was she supposed to do that?
âBut how will I know when youâre close to cumming?â she shyly inquired. Alex stopped licking for a moment, and said, âI guess youâll just have to figure that out for yourselfâ he laughed unhelpfully. She noticed that he hadnât gone back to licking her pussy, so she gently grabbed his cock and started slowly masturbating him. She felt him stiffen in her hand, and kept it up until he was fully hard. Then she felt a kiss on her clit, and he was back to cunt licking. His tongue stabbed deep into her pussy hole, squirming its way inside her. Her hand unconsciously squeezed his cock and moaned.
As the next few minutes unfolded, Heather found herself strangely frustrated. She wanted so badly to concentrate on the wonderful sensations between her thighs, but she was constantly distracted by trying to figure out if Alex was getting soft, or was getting too close to cumming. It was maddening. As if that wasnât enough, she found that she had never wanted to suck a cock so badly as right now, especially one right in her face. She wanted to feel his hard manhood in her mouth. Her fingers were telling her how hot he was, and she imagined the taste of him, the hardness in her mouth, and the pleasure she could give him. She even stuck her tongue out a few times and hoped he might shove it in her mouth, but he didn't. She licked her own fingers and kept him wet.
She closed her eyes and pretended that he was inside her, using her however he wanted. Ever so slightly, she noticed that his breathing had deepened. His tongue seemed dryer, more...rough and demanding. With a start, she realized he must be close to cumming. She immediately stopped stroking him and held his cock tightly. He moaned slightly, then stopped his lickingâŚ
âDamn. Youâre good. You knew I was close to cumming, didnât you?â Alex asked with a slight ironic twist to his voice. She said nothing. A sharp slap on her ass startled her. âI asked you a fucking question! You knew, didnât you?â he demanded. âYes! I guess so...â she replied, her ass cheek smarting. âFine. You think youâre so smart, well, I want you to find a way to make me cum with wordsâ he replied as he crawled out from under her. âWhat?? I mean, I donât understand...â Heather asked, trying to figure out what he meant and simultaneously lamenting the pussy licking that had just stopped.
âFirst of all, get up and go over to that chair over there. What I want is simple. I want you to make me cum. But you canât touch yourself, and you canât touch me. All you can do is paint a picture for me with words. You just sit there in that chair and talk. If Iâm turned on, then you just might make me cum that way. Since youâre so smart, Iâm sure you can think of something to get me off, right?â he explained. He gripped his own cock, standing there, and started slowly stroking his dick right in front of her face, teasing her.
âOh, and in case you DO manage to get me off, I want to remember this, so let me just start this video camera I brought with meâ he added, walking to the closet. Alex pulled out a video camera, set it on the table aimed at her and pushed a button. A small red light came on and Heather realized that she was naked. She pulled down the teddy, trying to cover her body as much as possible.
âI didnât say you could do that,â Alex said very very quietly. âIn fact, I think youâre over dressed for this. Take off that teddy.â He demanded. She looked at him briefly, looked at the camera again, and then removed the teddy. âSpread your legs for the camera. I want it to capture how damn wet you are right now, and how hard your nipples are.â Heather felt flushed, embarrassed and slightly buzzed, but also, she realized, turned on. She spread her legs, and brushed her nipples with her arm as she did so, sending shock waves down to her clit. If anything, she knew she was going to get even wetter.
Alex propped himself up with some pillows on the bed and waited, watching her. She was obviously at a loss for words. âWhat should I say?â she asked. âAnything you want. Whatever you think will get me off againâ he replied. Heather thought for a moment and then started detailing a fantasy she had about having sex in the desert. How it would start, where it would go and what would happen. But she noticed that he wasnât getting that much harder. And he wasnât touching himself either. In fact, he looked bored. She stopped, frustrated and confused.
âI donât know what to talk about. Could you give me a hint?â she asked him, trying to look as sweet as possible. Alex considered. âOkay, Iâll give you a hint, but if I do, then I get to mark you first.â She wondered what that meant, but didnât really care. She wanted to get him off. âOkay, anythingâ she said, giving in. Alex smiled, got off the bed and went to her purse. He dug around in her purse and found a tube of lipstick. Removing the cap, he walked over to her and bent down.
With soft strokes, he wrote âpussy lickerâ across her chest, above her breasts. She didnât know what he wrote and tried to look down, but he promptly yanked her face up to look at his. âYou can figure out what I wrote later. Right now you need to make me cum again. So hereâs your hint: I love watching two women make love to each other. Tell me about a time you made it with another womanâ he told her, going back to the bed and getting comfortable. âBut, I donât even know women, sexually. Iâve never ever thought about being with a woman, so how could I tell you that?â she asked, feeling frantic and out of control again.
âI donât care. Thatâs whatâll get me off right now, so go for it.â Heather thought for a moment and then decided that if there was ever a time to come up with a fantasy, now was the time. She started to speak.
Chapter V: The Fantasy
âThere is this ONE woman at work... I think maybe sheâs into women. A couple of times Iâve talked with her and she said some things that made me think she might be into women,â she said, watching his dick like a hawk. âLike what?â Alex asked, interested. âWell, one time we were going out to lunch by the beach, and we had to wait for a train crossing. Right next to us was a woman in a tiny bikini, also waiting to cross, and she carried a surfboard with her. My friend â her name is Lisa â said something about her having a beautiful body, and then she kind of looked at me funny. I wasnât too comfortable with her comment, so I just kind of laughed it off, but I later wondered if she was hinting about something.â Alexâs cock hadnât moved yet, but she clearly had his attention. âGo onâ he said, waving casually at her. Heather decided to take the plunge.
âLater that weekend, I was out in my back yard, soaking in the hot tub, when I started thinking about her. I mean, she IS very beautiful. Long dark hair, straight, beautiful skin, great lips⌠And she is always wearing hot clothes. Blouses that seem to show off her cleavage. So I was thinking about that for a while, wondering if she was bi or something like that.â Heather had never told another person about that thought, but now that she was speaking out loud, she realized that she really did think that Lisa was a hottie. Alexâs cock twitched ever so slightly, and Heather noticed. âSo you were thinking about what it would be like to make out with this woman, hmmm?â he asked her, smiling lecherously. âNo! I mean, I was thinking about her, but only just that she was so pretty!â Heather replied defensively. âRiiiight! Well, Iâd certainly LOVE to see you go down on another woman, so why donât you pretend like you WERE thinking about her that way, and tell me what youâd do to herâ he suggested. Heather realized that this was how she was going to get him to cum. So she closed her eyes and imagined Lisa in the hot tub with her. When she opened her mouth to speak, she found that her lips were dry, and her voice cracked a bit. She ran her tongue across her lips and continued. Suddenly, this became her fantasy too.
âI imagined Lisa in the hot tub with me. Maybe I invited her over for a drink and a dip in the pool, and it was such a great night that we decided to go back out and enjoy the hot tub and have some wine. We had already had a bit to drink, so we were slightly tipsy. We got to talking about men, and I realized that Lisa was looking at me kind of funny-like. I smiled back at her, and then Lisa asked if I would be okay if she took off her top. She said she loved the feel of the hot water on her skin, and whenever she went hot tubbing, she always went naked. I told her it was no problem and to feel free to get comfortable. Lisa stood up and reached behind her to untie her top. The whole time she was looking right at me and smiling. Her top came off and, well, I just couldnât help myself. She had such beautiful breasts that I just couldnât help but look at them. While I was checking her out, Lisa pulled her bottom down and took it off too. Since she was standing, I noticed that she was completely shaved, and her pussy really made me feel turned on, and excited, I guess.â
Heather paused and glanced over at Alex and noticed that his cock had risen to a slightly erect state. She had his full attention. âGo onâ he said simply. âWell, we talked for a while longer and then Lisa asked if I wanted to get out of my suit too. I said sure, and before I knew it, she was over next to me, turning me around and reaching for the knot behind my back. As the top came off, her hands came around my sides and she gently cupped my breasts in her hands. I was shocked! But, it also felt so damn good. I turned around, intending to ask her not to do that, but I came face to face with her and the next thing I knew, her lips were on mine. It was as if I couldnât help myself. I kissed her fully on the lips. It mustâve been the wine, or the water or something, but we made out like teenagers for at least 15 minutes. When we finally came up for air, I could swear I could hear my heart beating in my chest. I had never before thought about being with a woman, but I had to taste her.â Alex was now totally erect now, and had slowly started stroking himself in front of her again. He looked at her, his eyes locked with hers, and asked her âYou wanted to go down on her, didnât you?â Heather replied âYes. I wanted to taste her so badâ, suddenly realizing that she wasnât lying any more. She was getting wet again, and she had NEVER considered being intimate with a woman before. Yet here she was, telling Alex this false story, trying to get him to cum, and suddenly coming to realize that she might really want to go down on a woman sometime. She closed her eyes again and started imagining what it would be like. Her hand unconsciously moved to touch her pussy, but Alex frowned her, clicked his tongue, and quickly stood up and reached over to slap her hand away. She had forgotten his rules, but he corrected her. At least she could see that his cock was rock hard, standing in front of her now. Alex gave her another look, then sat back down. "Continue," he said.
âI took her hand and we went back to my bedroom. I lit a couple of candles and pushed her back on the bed. She looked absolutely beautiful on the bed. Her skin still hot to the touch, slightly wet, glistening in the flickering candle light. I sat down on the side of her and started stroking her leg, running a hand up her thigh and back down again. She took my hand and placed it on her breast, squeezing it and telling me that she liked it. She could tell I had never been with a woman, but she was guiding me as I explored. I couldnât stand it any longer. I slowly came toward her and kissed her again. Then her chin, her neck, her chest, and finally her nipple. It was the first time I had ever had a womanâs nipple in my mouth, but it felt soooo erotic. I ran my tongue across it and felt it harden in my mouth. I heard a noise and glanced down to find her rubbing her clit. Her breathing was starting to grow ragged, but I couldnât leave her nipple. I sucked on it, nursed on it and made love to it with my mouth. I was getting so wet too.â When she said that, Alex glanced down at her spread legs and noticed that she was getting wet again in the retelling. She was turning herself on as well as him.
âFuck!â he said, still stroking his now rock hard cock. âYou DO want to make me cum, donât you?â he asked. âYesssâŚâ Heather hissed back, almost a whisper. âWell, youâre close, but not close enough. Get over here and climb up on me like youâre going to ride me, but donât try to do anything of the sortâ he said as he moved up the bed a bit. When she had climbed up onto his legs, he gave her more directions: âI want that hot cum of yours on my cock, but weâre going to do it a different way. I want you to sit on my cock. Spread your pussy lips and put your pussy right on top of my cock, and then sit. I want to feel that wetness all over my cock, but I want you to feel how hard I am against your clit, and I want you to see it when I cum over both of us.â She complied, feeling his hardness against her pussy and clit, and groaning, wanting to feel him inside her instead. He still would not let her put his cock inside her, and she was practically ready to beg for it. But as she settled onto his cock, he grabbed her hips and held her firmly in place, rocking her on his manhood. âOkay, now tell me the rest of your story. I want to hear about your first taste of pussyâ he told her gruffly. She looked at him and began again.
âI mustâve been doing a good job on her nipples, because Lisa suddenly started masturbating faster, and her eyes were closed. I wanted to taste her cum, so I asked her if she was close to cumming. She said she was, so I told her to slow down and let me go down on her. She opened her eyes, leaned forward to kiss me, and then pulled my head down between her legs.â As Heather said this, Alex had started to slowly slide her hips back and forth, causing Heatherâs now leaking pussy to slide forward and backward on his cock. She almost couldnât speak because of the sensation of his dick on her pussy and clit, but she now was turned on and wanted to make this fantasy about her and Lisa as real as possible. As Alex continued to use her wet pussy as a fuck slide, she continued her story for him. âLisa pulled my face down between her legs, now spread really wide, and I could feel the heat from her pussy. She was SO wet! Her musky scent was driving me wild, almost like getting buzzed. I opened my mouth and put my tongue on her cunt lips for my first taste of a woman. God, she tasted so good. I couldnât help myself. I just started eating her out like sheâd leave at any second. I wanted her pussy juice all for myself. I wanted it on my lips, my mouth, my face, my tits, everywhere. She was bucking and grinding away at me, and I could feel her hands behind the back of my head, pulling me into her crotch. She had one leg up between my legs, rubbing up against my pussy, and I was in heaven. I could have stayed there all night.â
âJust when I thought I might have my own orgasm, she told me she was close to cumming and she wanted me to just shove my tongue as far up into her pussy as I could. As I did, I started tongue-fucking her hard. We both started cumming at the same time!â As if on cue, Alexâs cock, which was now coated with Heatherâs juices, started spurting cum all up his stomach and chest. Heather could feel the sperm shoot up his cock as it throbbed on her clit, and she came at the same time, drenching his dick with her cum. She ground down on his cock, trying to get his still-shooting fuck pole into her pussy, but all she succeeded in doing was making Alex cum more. As she came down from her cum, she rubbed her pussy along his shaft, covering both of them with each other. Spent, she collapsed forward onto his chest, smearing his spunk over the both of them as his cock continued to spasm on her pussy. Heather and Alex lay together like that for several minutes, both catching their breath and soaking in the full measure of their sexual encounter.
Heather whispered in his ear âI want you to fuck me, Sir! PLEASE! I need to feel you inside me and Iâll do anything if youâll just fuck me. I donât fucking care how. Bend me over a chair and fuck my pussy hard in front of the window, or do me doggie style or whatever. Just fuck me. Please!â she begged him quietly. He pulled her up to look at him and he kissed her on the lips once, then quietly said âThatâs what I wanted from you â your full submission. I want you to let me do anything to you that I want, whenever I want, and however I want it tonight. Is that what youâre willing to give me?â he asked her, gazing intently, wondering what her answer would be. âYes. Oh god, yes. Anything you want. Just tell me what you want me to do. Iâm yours any time you want to use my bodyâŚâ she replied. He smiled at her, kissed her once again, and then got up. The scent of the gardenias wafted through the room once again as he moved behind her and slipped his slightly soft cock into her wet pussy. He knew sheâd find a way to get him hard with her pussy â he only had to demand it, to tell her what he wanted, and his new submissive lover would do exactly as he said.
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