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In the midst of a driving rainstorm and ferocious winds, an accident on a nearby building site sends a massive crane crashing into the side of Vicki's apartment block.
About to step into the shower, Vicki now finds herself trappedâalone, vulnerable, and, worst of all, completely naked. She must confront her deepest fears and the stranger dispatched to rescue her. But how well has his training prepared him for this unexpected and intimate encounter?
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A Night in Shining KevlarÂ
His radio crackled. âGerry, I swear to god, if you donât get your ass down here pronto, Iâm leaving you up there all night. Do you have any idea what time it is? Becki will have my skin!â
Gerry sighed. It had been a long shift, and it wasnât his fault that the weather had slowed everything down. It was him up here while that idiot Jack was in the warmth of the portacabin, two hundred feet below.
He lowered the craneâs hook, setting it back into its resting position. Weary after his grueling day, he flicked everything to neutral, switched off the controls and started to pack up his belongings. Heater off, thermos in his backpack, keys removed. Jack had kept him up far longer than had been scheduled, and the fatigue was real.
His radio crackled again. âGerry, Iâm not fucking around anymore. The winds are picking up. Get your ass down here right fucking now, and⌠mind your way.â Jack sounded concerned. Probably because he knew how close heâd cut it with the weather they were expecting, but nevertheless Gerry picked up his pace.
There was a blast of chilly air as he opened the cab. He shivered as he eyed the long ladder beneath him. Heights had never bothered him, but⌠ladders in the rain and the wind? No sane person thought that was a good time. He clipped on his harness and began the uncomfortable descent.
Gerry was a third of the way down before he remembered. Fuck! I am way too damn tired. He wrapped an arm around a rung and reached for his radio. âBoss? Could you eyeball the boom? I forgot to double-check the locks.â
His radio crackled in reply. âDid you park it up, Gerry?â Not the affirmative he was looking for. He sighed.
âYeah, I parked it. But I forgot to check the safety on the lock. Can you see it from where you are?â
âFor fuckâs sake, Gerry, get your ass down here. The weather is getting worse, and I want to go home!â
Another sigh. Jack couldnât be bothered to get out of his warm portacabin and walk around to look at the boom: all of one minute. Fine. âGonna go back up and check the safeties, boss.â
âThatâll take youâŚ! Okay, okay. Iâll check.â The radio went quiet for a few seconds, before crackling again. âItâs parked, okay? Now if youâre not down here in ten minutes, youâll be working a double shift this weekend.â
What an asshole. Gerry shook his head and continued his climb down.
 ~
Vicki kicked open the door of her apartment, a rain-soaked, brown paper bag heavy with groceries clutched delicately in both arms. She leant back long enough to pull her keys from the lock, carefully balancing the bag on her chest with one arm supporting it from below.
She nursed the wet bag into the kitchen, anxious to set it down before it split and spilled three daysâ worth of food over her floor. The door swung shut behind her with the reassuring sound of the latch engaging and Vicki staggered to the counter, depositing the bag with a sigh of relief.
She slipped her work daypack from her back, lowering it carefully to the floor â it wouldnât be good to bounce her laptop. The bag was drenched, but she knew it was waterproof; it could wait a little longer. She pulled off her coat, leaving it on the back of the kitchen chair to dry. Her long, wet hair immediately soaked the back of her sweater, but that didnât matter as the rain had already leaked through. Some food, and a shower⌠maybe not in that order. She shivered; it was too cold to have wet hair and damp clothes. A hot shower was exactly what she needed.
Vicki picked up the TV remote and flicked on the news channel, letting the noise wash over her as she considered her day.
ââŚone of eight passengers aboard a plane that reportedly crashed on WednesdayâŚâ
It was nice to be home early. Sheâd finished her project three days ahead of schedule and her manager had gratefully given her the rest of the afternoon off. It had been a pleasant surprise and a helpful sign of his approval, especially when her quarterly appraisal was scheduled for the coming Tuesday. She pulled her sweater off, draping it across the back of the sofa.
ââŚthe Russian Aviation Authority has confirmedâŚâ
She could really do with a raise. Sheâd worked damn hard these last two years, and showing what sheâd done in her project would maybe give the incentive her manager needed to agree.
ââŚReuters reports. More on our main story later.â
Her blouse was next, button by button, and she made her way through to the bedroom. Perhaps, with a raise, she could start to save enough for a deposit and finally get out of this shitty apartment. Maybe move into a place where theyâd actually bother to repair things when she asked them.
ââŚupdate on the weather conditions we can expect this evening and on into the nightâŚâ
She slipped the blouse off her shoulders, tossing it into her hamper before heading into her bathroom to turn the shower on full. It always took a moment to warm up. Returning to her bedroom, Vicki unbuttoned her jeans, just as the weather reporter said something that caught her attention.
ââŚand itâs evident that weâre in for a bit of a wild rideâŚâ
Chance would be a fine thing, she thought as she heard the TV. She pushed down her jeans. When was the last time sheâd had a wild ride? It had been too long⌠longer than she cared to remember.
ââŚsignificant low-pressure systems moving in from the west, bringing more torrential rain and a surge of strong windsâŚâ
Yeah, sheâd noticed the torrential rain, but thanks for the heads-up. Shower, food, relax for a bit, bed. She stepped free of her jeans and pulled off her bra, panties, and socks, throwing them all in the hamper, and padded naked into the bathroom and her hot shower.
Behind her, the TV droned on.
ââŚpicking up speed throughout the night, potentially reaching gusts of up to sixty miles per hourâŚâ
 ~
âFuck me, Gerry, you know weâre not allowed to run it in the dark!â
Gerry glanced casually out of the portacabin window. It was technically twilight, so they were okay on that point. It was barely 5:20pm. Heâd been down by five, and it had been Jack that had kept him up there, the hypocrite. Now he was venting.
âIâm outta here, Gerry.â Jack was pulling on his coat, zipping it up. âIf I have to tell those guys one more timeâŚâ
Gerry tuned out Jackâs complaining; heâd heard it all before. They hadnât broken the rules about operating in the dark, and besides, the wind was a far worse problem. As if to emphasize the point the windows of the portacabin shook fiercely, and rain pummeled the roof. Gerry glanced out of the window again. If heâd still been up there in thisâŚ
Outside there were shouts. At first, Gerry wasnât sure what heâd heard over Jackâs continued bitching and the howl of the wind outside, then his brow furrowed.
âDid you hear that?â he asked, interrupting Jackâs complaining, his usually calm tone carrying an edge of urgency.
âWhat?â asked Jack, stopping to listen. The portacabin windows shook again, the rain adding a rapid staccato. âYou mean the wind? Fierce, eh?â
âI thought I heard someone yell,â Gerry said, putting down his coffee and making his way to the cabin door.
âWell, Iâm off, so you deal with their beef, okay?â
A sound unlike any Gerry had ever heard screeched through the night, yet he knew instinctively what it signified and for a moment his hand froze in shock on the handle. Then heâd ripped it open, racing outside. Above him the boom whistled through the air, the steel cable whipsawing and twisting.
ââŚNoâŚ!â Gerry could only watch in anguish as the hook whipped past, and he knew the doom this could spell. A moment later it smashed through the wall of the foundation core theyâd finished just last week. The hook snagged, the boom lashing back and forth like an angry catâs tale. âYou lying cunt!â he turned to yell at Jack. âYou said youâd checked it!â Gerry ran down the ramp, heading for the ladder to the crane. It would take him at least twenty minutes to climb back up, and there was no guarantee he could regain control even once he was there.
âIâŚâ behind him Jack could only stare, his eyes wide with fear.
The hook was well-caught, Gerry realized. Perhaps that would buy him some time⌠but the boom was still thrashing in the wind, and suddenly the air was filled with the sound of screeching metal. Whatever had caused the chain of events Gerry wouldnât know until the accident report weeks later, but that didnât stop it all playing out before him.
The momentum of the boom combined with the abrupt pull of the snagged hook destabilized the crane. That had been enough for the wind to take advantage, and the crane had begun to rock in its foundation. In theory the anchors should have supported it still, but one had an undiscovered fault in its chain that first stretched then snapped with the torque of the shifting weight. The craneâs foundations were supposed to stop that from happening, but while the foundations were solid the ground beneath had become water-logged, providing just enough give to allow for movement â and in winds this strong, that was all it took. With the added mechanical forces from the flailing boom the stability was compromised in mere seconds, and the merciless wind took gleeful advantage.
Gerry could only watch as the crane began to topple, seeming to fall so very slowly, until gravity took a hold and all at once it came crashing down.
270,000lbs of steel fell against an adjacent apartment block and to Gerryâs surprise it all but bounced off. But the shock caused the mast of the crane to warp, applying torque to the momentum of the falling counterweight, and it swung round like a giantâs fist and smashed into the same building. By sheer dumb luck and the randomness of all the contributing factors, the counterweight seemed to scrape through the outermost wall, shredding it in the process, but blessedly failing to penetrate into the apartments within. Through the rain, wind and darkness, Gerry could see into the apartments as the wall was stripped away, fleeting images assailing his mind that would remain with him forever: a family cowering in each otherâs arms, staring out at the devastation around them; a man seated at a table, stunned into immovability as he was revealed to the world; two women screaming as blocks of concrete fell about them.
For a long moment he could only stand and stare, paralyzed by the responsibility and guilt that threatened to crush him.
It was several minutes before the sirens started, one after another after another, until even the rain and wind fell quiet before them.
 ~
Vicki huddled in the bottom of her shower cubicle, her arms wrapped around her head as about her the world slowly stopped shaking.
Her breath was coming in gasps, her eyes wide with fear in the darkness. The lights had gone out, but the shower was still on. Yeah, silver linings. An absurd thought in the face of calamity.
There was a cold gust of wind and she peeked from under one arm. Part of the bathroom wall had collapsed in rubble, and the door had been smashed open by falling debris. It blocked the lower half of the doorway, but over it she could see dense, dark clouds, illuminated from below by the lights of the city.
The wall! Where the fuck is the wall?!
Wind was whistling through the space that had once been her bedroom.
The lights flickered on again, enough to show the ruins of her apartment and the steel girder blocking the door to her bathroom, before the bulbs inset in her ceiling all blew as one, and darkness descended once more.
Vicki bit back a scream, pressing herself into the corner of the shower.
The lightsâŚÂ she thought. To blow so violently there had to be an electrical exposure somewhere, and she was sitting in water. Everyone knew water and electricity didnât mix. Should she move, and risk encountering a live cable dangling somewhere in the dark? Or stay where she was, waiting for the water to seep across the floor, eventually encountering the electricity that would shoot back through the liquid and straight into her? Both options were terrifying.
She drew her knees up under her chin, trembling, and sat in the darkness.
Above her, the shower sprayed on.
 ~
âGot it.â Dave had been on the radio with the Incident Commander. âAmar, how far out are we?â
âTwo minutes, Cap.â
âAlright. Listen up, lads, weâre on Rescue. There are four companies already on site. IC says fires were minimal and largely under control, and evacuation is the major task. Casualties seem blessedly light so far â itâs our job to keep them that way.â A murmur of assent met this comment. âTheyâre already working through the inside of the building, so weâve been tasked with going in the external opening.â
âWhat does that mean, Cap?â Amar asked.
âI guess weâll find out in a minute, wonât we?â
They pulled around the last corner and all at once there were people everywhere, illuminated by the strobe lights of numerous emergency vehicles: in addition to the four appliances on scene there were countless cop cars and ambulances. Joe, their chauffeur, slowed right down and edged through, leaning on his horn for emphasis where needed. It never ceased to amaze how slow people were to move when a fire truck was bearing down on them.
They were waved to a space before the building, on the end of the line of appliances already in position.
âHoly fuckâŚ!â Michael stepped out of the cab, gazing up at the remnants of the eight-story apartment block. The first five floors remained intact, virtually unscathed. However, where the sixth and seventh floors once stood, a gaping wound marred the building's side. Above, the top floor projected out precariously, resembling a grim balcony, its edge slightly sagging to partially bridge the void below.
âSnap to, lads!â said Dave, âMike, on the ladder. Amar, youâre supporting. Joe and Miguel join the crews working inside. SteveâŚâ
Michael turned to jog to the rear of the fire truck, Amar heading back into the cab to deploy the outriggers.
Around him other emergency vehicles were still pulling up, uniformed men and women everywhere, a web of hoses across the asphalt, a constant stream of red, white, blue, and yellow strobes illuminating the scene, the lights reflecting off the wet road. They had been twenty minutes away when the alarm went out, and the road in each direction was a swarm of activity indicative of how much had already been done.
On the ground, near to where they had pulled up, Michael saw the smashed remains of the crane. The counterweight had fallen partly across a pickup truck and a cab â both vehicles now crumpled wrecks â while the frame itself lay across the road and pointed back toward the building site like an accusing finger. Police vehicles marked the end of the cordoned area, with several officers holding back the crowds that had gathered despite the weather. As he watched, an ambulance left, edging forward, the crowd reluctantly parting to make way.
From the radio chatter theyâd understood the casualties so far had been light â which was nothing short of a miracle. But the incident had happened at the end of the working day and most residents hadnât yet arrived back home. The apartment block had been largely empty.
It was Michaelâs job to get up into the building and help ensure that âlargely emptyâ became âcompletely emptyâ, and any survivors still trapped there didnât become a statistic.
The rain had lessened, thank god, but what there was still came in horizontally, blown by winds harder than he could remember. Ladders in the rain and wind? No sane person thought that was a good time.
The radio on his shoulder crackled. âReady here, Mike,â Amarâs voice came through.
He thumbed the talk button. âRoger.â
âMike.â Dave was behind him, looking grim, his voice raised to fight the noise of the wind and rain and the commotion around them. âUpdate from the Incident Commander. Most of the building has been evacuated right now. Almost everyone who can walk is out â the rest will be shortly. But weâve got a problem - we canât shut the gas off into the building. Access to the main valve in the basement is buried under rubble. Theyâre trying to reach the utility company.â
âHow long?â Michael asked.
âAt least fifteen minutes.â He scowled, clearly thinking the same thing Michael was: incompetence. âThe risk of explosions is high. We need to get anyone who is left in there out right fucking now. The other guys are on evacuation internally, but thereâs no guarantee theyâll have access to the damaged apartments. Get up there in the cherry picker and check no one has been left behind.â
âOn it, Captain.â
He clambered up into the aerial tower ladder basket, his breathing gear and fire-resistant Kevlar suit a hindrance, but a familiar weight. It took but a moment to position himself, clip on his harness and affix the mask of his Self-Contained Breathing Apparatus (SCBA). Michael thumbed the radio on his shoulder. âGo, Amar.â
Slowly the ladder extended, rising up like a sea snake from the ocean bed, and Michael gripped the rail of the basket as the wind whipped around him. It took but a minute to raise the platform to a gap on the seventh floor. He swiveled the spotlight mounted on the basket, its strong beam quickly cutting through the gloom. Against the far wall was a kitchen, or what was left of it, while immediately before him were the smashed remnants of the floor that had been ripped away.
Again, he pressed the button on his radio. âGoing in.â
He unclipped his harness, pushing open the gate to the basket and dropped down into the apartment. Profound darkness pervaded, and the strobe lights below hindered more than helped, making the shadows flicker and bounce. Michael pulled out his torch, directing the powerful beam to the gloomy areas not illuminated by the basketâs spotlight.
The light picked up the door to the apartment. Immediately inside the kitchen sat a backpack, balanced precariously on the edge of the hole in the floor. His torch found a bag of groceries sitting on one surface, oblivious to the carnage around it, untouched, undamaged. An incongruous image.
Someone had been here, but they werenât here now. Most people evacuating out through the apartment door wouldâve taken the backpack with them⌠and they hadnât. The implication was grim.
âHello? Anyone in here?â His voice was muffled by the SCBA mask, and he had to shout over the wind.
No response, but that meant nothing â they could simply not be able to respond. He moved carefully through the apartment, each step deliberate and slow, checking first for hazards or instability.
âSearch and Rescue. Make a noise if you can hear me.â Michael swiveled his flashlight around, trying to decipher the layout of the apartment. It was considerably harder when every surface was covered in rubble and brick-dust. His beam of light probed each corner and crevice where someone might cower, finding nothing, and there were no significant piles of debris beneath which a victim could be lying unconscious. He thumbed his radio, âThis room is clear. Getting back in the bucket.â
He had one hand on the basket when the explosion went off, a mere two rooms along from where he was standing. The building shook and he was thrown against the ladder, one leg swinging out over the seventy-foot drop, his body twisting around with the momentum of it and crashing back in again. He grunted at the impact, grasping at the basket rail, and hooking his arm around it. âOw.â
âMike! Mike! Come in!â
His knee smacked painfully against the platform, but he was able to scrabble for purchase, even as the material of his jacket slipped against the rail. He dropped the torch, freeing his hand, the wrist-strap causing it to dangle loose and clang against the metal rail, but it allowed him to grab a hold and pull himself in on his knees. It took a moment to steady his breathing, another to fumble for the ring of his harness and hook himself on.
His radio crackled again. âMike, come in!â
He thumbed the button, gasping a response, âIâm okay, Iâm okay.â
âGas explosion. Be careful up there, bro.â
Yeah, no shit. âRoger, Amar. Iâm going to move to the next roomâŚÂ away from that explosion.â
âRoger.â
The ladder pulled slowly and smoothly back, the wind whipping around him. He swiveled it slightly and directed the basket forward again, the entry here wider, the access easier. Once more the mounted spotlight cut through the shadows, illuminating the devastation. Most of the floor was warped, bent steel cables and smashed rubble tilting precariously toward the ground far below. Several feet of the twisted remnants of the floor jutted from the wall ahead, offering a natural target.
To his right, the destruction seemed to abruptly end, and beyond the apartment block continued on unblemished. The angle of the scrape through the room suggested where the counterweight had pulled free and dropped to the ground. He thumbed his radio. âAmar, this is the last room on this floor, right?â
âAffirmative.â
There was just one problem. He thumbed the mic button again. âAmar, access is within the building. I say again, basket will need to go in under that overhang.â
His radio crackled a response. âEr⌠negative Mike, need to confirm with Dave before you take the basket within the building.â
âWe donât have time here, Amar. We could get an explosion at any moment. We need to get people out. Beg forgiveness donât ask for permission â Iâm going in.â
There was a delay, then:Â âDo the rules ever apply to you? Acknowledged, you stubborn bastard.â
Michael grinned. That was fair, but there was a time to follow the book and a time to ignore it.
He aimed the basket towards the protruding floor. If this was the same apartment as the room heâd just checked, then he knew it had been recently occupied. It was difficult to be sure where one apartment ended and the next began when all the walls had been stripped away, but this made sense. The previous rooms had been kitchen and (probably) living area, which would make this one the bedroom. The bed was clearly gone, the floor on which it sat a twisted, sloping mess beneath his platform. A large steel girder had smashed through the door and into the room beyond. Second bedroom, perhaps? Walk-in closet? It was the only option left; there wasnât enough floor out here to support a place for anyone to hide in.
If whoever had come home wasnât in there, then⌠well, heâd know soon enough.
At least the gaping hole made it easy to get the platform into position. He found he could maneuver it almost all the way in, until the floor below was a simple step down. The wind was cut significantly as soon as the basket was past the protruding wall and beneath the overhang, which was an added benefit.
He reached up to his radio. âGoing in.â
âHello?â the voice was small, he almost doesnât hear it, but it came again, louder. âHello! Hello!â
Thank fuck for that, they were alive â or she was alive; the voice was definitely feminine.
âI hear you!â he called out. The voice came from behind the door through which the steel girder had fallen, partially blocking the doorway. Michael took a moment to thumb his radio. âFound one survivor, stand by,â then he called out, âIâm coming in!â
âNo!â
No?
âIâm search and rescue, Iâm here to help you.â
âYou⌠you canât come in,â she sounded desperate, scared, but her refusal was bewildering. Why didnât she want his help?
Michael felt his brow furrow in confusion. âLady, Iâm here to get you out. Are you injured?â
âNoâŚâ Scared, unsure.
âCan you come to me?â
âNo!â It was odd, this time her response carried a desperate edge.
âCan you explain the issue?â
âIâm⌠Iâm⌠Thereâs a loose electric cable somewhere around here. The lights blew. Thereâs water everywhere. I donât want you to get electrocuted.â
âRoger that, lady. Stand by.â Michael swiveled the torch to the ceiling, looking for loose wires or cables. Nothing. He turned the light to the walls, the floors, still unable to see a likely suspect. Thumbed his radio. âAmar? The victim thinks thereâs a live cable up here. Where are we with the power?â
âItâs out, Michael. Youâre okay to proceed.â
âThanks.â His hand dropped from his radio as he called out to her again. âPowerâs off, lady, you can come out.â
A long pause before she called out again. âCan you⌠can you see my wardrobe in the bedroom? Against the wall?â
Michael blinked in surprise. âNo wardrobe out here, lady. No wall, either.â Heâd dealt with some odd folk in his time, but that was one of the weirdest questions⌠then it hit him. A side door off the bedroom. âAre you in the bathroom?â
âYes.â
âAre you⌠dressed?â
There was another long pause and the answer, when it came, was reluctant. ââŚNo.â
Okay then. âWe still have to get you out, lady.â
âYes⌠but⌠can you please get me some clothes? From the hamper? Itâs by the door. Or⌠the sheet from my bed?â
Michael swung his torch over to check, but he already knew the answer. âLady⌠Iâm sorry but thereâs no hamper. Thereâs no bed, come to that. Donât you have a towel?â
âNo⌠well, yes⌠but itâs lying under the girder. And I canâtâŚÂ fucking get it out!â her desperation and frustration obvious.
Figures, he thought. âOkay. Well, IâŚâ
Another explosion, and the building trembled. He heard the woman scream, and the floor shook so hard he lost his balance, dropping to one knee. It took several seconds for the tremors to stop.
âCome in, Mike, come in.â
âWeâre good Amar, but fuck me that was close. Why isnât the gas off?â Behind the door he could hear the girl sobbing in terror. âItâs going to be alright, lady! Iâll be right with you!â
âNo update,â the disgust came through clearly. âGet a move on, Mike.â
âRoger, stand by.â He took a step toward the door, the light from his torch showing the bathroom beyond, one wall partially collapsed. âLady, weâve got to get you out of here now.â No response, only sobs. He took a different tack. âCan you smell gas?â
She was quiet for a moment, her sobbing stopping. âNo. Is there a leak? Is that whatâs causing the explosions? I⌠I canât smell anything. Can you?â
âNo. I have a mask.â
âThat explains why your voice sounds strange.â
âYeah. Sorry about that.â
 ~
âYeah. Sorry about that,â he replied, his tone stoic. âIâm going to come in, okay?â
âNo,â Vicki replied, huddling in the corner of the shower. The water was still on, though both the flow and the temperature had lessened. Yet, it was still lukewarm, and that was better than nothing.
âWeâre out of time, Lady. Iâm coming in whether you want me to or not. Itâs time to go, okay?â
Of all the ways to be rescued. âDonât you⌠donât you have a blanket or something?â
There was a pause before he replied. âSorry, no. Itâs not equipment for this role.â
She was out of options. He was at the doorway, climbing over the girder, the torch illuminating the room, and then he was in with her.
âWell, hello there,â his tone seemed softer, kinder, when he wasnât yelling at her over the wind and the rain. It was a lot quieter in here, and heâd dropped his voice accordingly.
âUm⌠hi.â She couldnât see him at all, just a dark silhouette against the night outside. She realized the beam of light directed at the door was static, mounted on whatever apparatus had brought him here, but he had a torch in one hand, and it was right in her face, dazzling her. And revealing her complete, humiliating, nakedness. As if he realized, he turned the torch away, angling the beam to the white tiles of her bathroom wall. He then placed it carefully on the floor, freeing his hands. That was intelligent of him, and thoughtful too. The light reflected around the room, just enough for them to see by.
Without the light in her eyes, she was able to perceive more of him, though he was a shapeless figure in all his gear. A large, looming figure. And she, a small, nude, vulnerable girl huddled in a corner.
He took a step closer. âIs that water hot?â
âUm⌠it was. It isnât now. I left it running because⌠itâs still lukewarm. I thought I would get too cold if I turned it off.â
âThat was smart. Real smart.â
And lucky, she thought. The plumbing ran internally, so there was no reason for the pipes in her walls to be damaged, yet she could well imagine a leak anywhere wouldâve drained the tanks rapidly. She knew sheâd been fortunate â though that was relative â how fortunate was it to have your apartment destroyed in some freak accident? But at least she was alive, and the water had helped keep her warm. She estimated it had been only a half hour since the incident, but exposed to the elements? Wet and naked? She could be in a far worse state.
Yeah, worse than being completely naked before a stranger, with a crowd of people gathered below to witness it all⌠and the only way out⌠down there. She shuddered.
âHave you been shivering?â he asked, clearly double-checking - or maybe heâd seen her shudder.
It was difficult to be sure. âNo⌠I⌠I donât think so. Trembling, I think⌠not shivering.â Sheâd done a lot of trembling. âIâm a bit cold, but itâs not unbearable.â
âIâm impressed, lady. That shows a level of perception and composure that is rare in an emergency situation.â His voice sounded kind and the compliment was nice, but she couldnât help but think he was just trying to reassure and distract her. But of course, that was exactly his goal. âShall we get you out of here now?â
âI guessâŚâ How was this going to work? She could think of no way of keeping her modesty and yet still be rescued. What are the odds heâd just leave me here? It would be a lot simpler.
Another pace closer. âCan you stand?â
She nodded, but perhaps he couldnât see in the poor light. âYes.â
There was an expectant pause, but she couldnât bring herself to move. It was too embarrassing, too humiliating, and sheâd been too scared for too long.
âLady, can you stand up please? We need to go now.â He was still speaking gently, almost condescendingly, and it was beginning to irritate her. She didnât need to be babied, she just needed to not be trapped, naked, in her own apartment.
And maybe she was being irrational. Maybe it was a simple matter to stand up, naked, and allow this man she didnât know to look upon her, naked, escort her from her room, naked, to descend into the crowds of people who no doubt awaited her below, all of whom would see her naked. But it didnât feel simple. âIâm⌠Iâm naked.â
âI did notice that.â There was sympathy in his voice. Was he pitying her?
Her reply was both acerbic and sardonic. âIâm sorry, Mr. Fireman, I forgot to check for impending doom before I took my shower.â
He laughed, a genuine sound even with the mask distorting it. âThatâs great, lady. That kind of spirit is why youâre still alive, why youâre going to make it out of here just fine. Iâll keep you safe, lady.â
âVicki,â she muttered. It was tough to be a âladyâ huddled, trembling, in the corner of her shower.
âVicki,â he said, and she could hear the smile in his voice. âNice to meet you. Iâm Michael.â
âYeah. Nice to meet you too, Michael.â He actually seemed like a really nice guy. Her rescuer. Why did they have to meet like this? Why couldnât they have just got a coffee?
He took another step forward, and now he was mere feet away, the light from his torch reflecting off her white tiles, providing an ambient glow that surrounded them. She could see his uniform, the amount of gear he was carrying, even his mask beneath his helmet.
He looked intimidating.
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Please ignore the 'of 3' - I can't edit the title. This will, unfortunately, be four parts - I underestimated the max post length for this story. I'll link as I post them.
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