First time writing Erotic Flash Fiction or Erotica for that matter. I would love to hear your critiques and criticisms.
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She stood in front of me, naked. Her thin body bared before me, a gift.
“Do you like what you see, Mr. Jeffers,” she asked as she swayed her narrow hips from side to side.
“What are you doing, Kaylee,” I asked as I swallowed hard and adjusted myself, trying to hide my erection.
She stepped forward, her hands clasped behind her back. My eyes ran up and down her body. From her small breasts to her hairless pussy and back up again.
“You didn’t answer my question, Mr. Jeffers,” she said in a low whisper.
I didn’t know what to say. Kaylee was my daughter’s best friend, and she was only eighteen years old.
“I… I… don’t know how to answer that, Kaylee,” I stammered. My cock was hard and aching.
She knelt between my legs. I straightened up and pushed my back against the couch, trying to distance myself. She looked up at me, biting her lower lip.
“Don’t be afraid, Daddy.”
My cock twitched in my gym shorts, hearing her call me that. She noticed and smiled.
“I’ve wanted to do this ever since I first met you.” She reached out and grabbed my cock through the fabric of my shorts. I moaned at her touch and jerked back a little.
“I don’t think you should be doing this,” I stuttered. “I think you need to leave.”
She rubbed my throbbing member through the shorts. Running the palm of her hand back and forth along its length, pressing it into my leg.
“This says otherwise, Daddy,” she moaned as she wiggled my cock from side to side, “I want to suck your cock, and you are going to let me,” she barked.
She leaned in and kissed the tip of my aching cock. A wet spot began to form on my shorts as pre cum leaked from my slit.
She looked back up at me. Her eyes filled with lust. She squeezed her hand around me.
“Now, we need to get these shorts off of you.”
She reached up, grabbed the waistband of my shorts, and pulled them down. I subconsciously rose my ass off the couch to help with the process. She pulled the shorts down my legs and tossed them behind her.
“No underwear, Daddy? That’s so hot,” she said in a sultry tone.
“Kaylee…,” I tried to protest but was cut short.
Before I could speak another word, she quickly leaned in and took my mushroom cap in her mouth. The tip of her tongue flicked across the slit. She squeezed the base of my shaft as she sucked and pulled her mouth off, causing an audible POP to echo throughout the living room.
“What were you saying, Daddy?”
I couldn’t speak. Her hand now sliding up and down my length. I moaned and leaned my head back on the couch, eyes closed.
“That’s what I thought,” she giggled.
My body tensed as she slowly licked my balls, circling my sack with her tongue. She cradled them in her hand and gently messaged each as she coated them in her salvia.
“Fuck,” I groaned as she took my left ball in her mouth, sucking and twirling her tongue around it.
She slowly pumped up and down my length as she spit out the one nut and took the other in her mouth, giving it equal attention.
Several little whimpers escaped my mouth.
“Daddy likes having his balls sucked, doesn’t he,” she asked mischievously.
“Yes, yes, he does,” I moaned, finally relaxing and giving in to this incredible gift I had been given.
I looked down just as she spit on my balls. She grasped them tightly just below my shaft.
“They are so big, Daddy. I think they need to be drained,” she said just before taking both in her mouth. She moaned around them, sending vibrations up my shaft as she jerked me from base to tip.
My body jerked as Kaylee pushed them further into her mouth. Her tongue twirled and licked around them. My hips bucked as I felt her tongue sneak out between her bottom lip and my sack, licking at my taint. Her hand still sliding up and down me at a slow and gentle pace.
“How are you so good at this,” I moaned through gritted teeth.
I reached down and began running my fingers through her auburn hair. She picked up the pace with her fist and tongue as she felt my hand on her head. She pulled her mouth off my balls, thick strands of spit dripping from my balls and her chin.
“Practice makes perfect, Daddy.”
“How many have you sucked, little one,” I said, engaging in the roleplay she wanted.
“You don’t wanna know, Daddy. They meant nothing. They were all just practice so I could make this the best head you have ever received.”
And with that, she took the head back in her mouth. She moved my shaft, causing it to circle in her wet, hot mouth. She slid her hand back down my rod, her mouth following suit. Halfway down, he stopped and gagged a little, drool escaping from between my hardness and her lips.
She pulled her head back up and off me.
“Daddy, that’s as far as I can go. You’re a lot bigger than the boys I practiced with,” she said, breathing a little heavier.
I looked down at her and smiled. “That’s okay. We can work on that, my pet.”
Pumping her hand up and down, she gazed into my eyes.
“That means you want me to be your little princess?”
“Yes, my sweet. That is exactly what it means.”
I played with her hair for a moment. Her strokes inched me closer and closer to orgasm.
“I think it’s time for you to make Daddy cum,” I said in an eager tone.
And without saying another word, she took me back in her mouth, bobbing up and down with furious intent. I left my hand on the back of her head, guiding the pace at which she sucked.
She tried to take a little more into her throat with every bob down. Drool escaping with each up and down motion. GWAUK… GWAUK… GWAUK… accompanied by wet slurping and sucking, filled the room.
My balls tighten as I felt the first of several ropes of cum exit my throbbing cock. I groaned and grunted as I came into this eighteen-year-old mouth. She didn’t stop her motion as each rope hit the back of her throat. I bucked my hips up, pushing a little too far. She gagged; her stomach heaved as she pulled her mouth free of my member.
Cum and salvia covered my cock. I looked down at her and smiled. Cum was slowly dripped from the corner of her mouth and down her chin. She held her mouth open, showing me what a good little girl she was.
She closed her mouth and swirled it around before swallowing. She opened her mouth and showed me it was all gone. She giggled.
“You taste amazing, Daddy,” she said.
She squeezed the base of my rod and pulled upward. She leaned in and licked my now softening member clean and made sure to suck at my slit to get every last drop she could.
I released a low moan as she finished what she started.
“Was I a good little good, Daddy,” she asked with a sense of satisfaction.
I leaned forward and caressed her chin. “Yes, you were,” I said with a satisfied smile.
I took her by the hand and helped her off her knees. I pulled her onto my lap and cradled her in my arms.
“This has to be our little secret. No one can know about this,” I whispered, kissing her forehead.
She nodded, “I know, Daddy.”
She pressed tight against my body. Her head was resting on my shoulder. I held her for another hour, cradling her. I ran my hands across her soft skin, occasionally squeezing her tiny ass. My hands explored her small chest. My fingers traced along her slick folds. I knew we didn’t have much time left together today, but I wanted her to know I worshiped her body with each touch.
I woke up expecting another dull day this morning.
I got this instead.
I got her.
She is my little.
I am her Daddy.
And she will always be cared for.