Figured I would condense this down into a single post rather than two.. I am finding a few issues (as I see it). Mainly, I am finding it difficult to extend sex scenes over 2-3 pages.

I don't often start stories in media reas (in the scene), I like to give build-up of some kind.. but I don't know how much si too much? For a short that is 9k long, is having only 3k of sex scenes spread out across a few different moments "normal"?

Another thing, smaller issue, is that I'm not sure how to write a blurb focussing on ass worship and body worship. I mean how many times can you really use butt metaphors in a blurb? Part of it is I dont know what the line is for Amazon to dungeon a book based on a blurb being "too sexual" or somesuch.

Advice greatly appreciated, thanks all.