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I've written a short story, and I'm looking for some critics. Here is the start. If you want to read the rest or fancy a bit of back and forth hmu on chat or message
One day, after a hard shift you decide to go to for a trip to the spa, you have a facial and a full body massage, delivered by a cute guy who's good with his hands, a good relaxing, so much so that time gets away from you. It's 9:30 but you decide you've enough time for a session in the sauna. You take a water bottle and some headphones, turn up the heat, music on and sat alone you relax. After some time the door suddenly opens and it's your masseuse. "I'm just about to close up" he says while gazing you up and down with a smile. Not feeling done with your evening, you ask wihh a cheeky grin "could I stay just 10 minutes longer, I promise I won't be any trouble". He looks shyly and smiles, "actually I wanted to use the sauna myself before I go"..
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