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In a world where less than 7% of the population is born male and even fewer are fertile Men are a hot commodity. To keep them safe and protected theyāre subservient to women, kept as slaves and breeders. They handle the work too simple for the more complex female mind and since everyone knows that fertile men are prone to rages the Belt has been developed. A simple ring that fits around the genitals and keeps them in line if they become to difficult to control. The Belt can deliver mild slightly painful electric shocks as reminders to behave all the way to a shock that will temporarily incapacitate a male, but there are fines for using it set that high since men are valuable. It can also be used as a device for pleasure and to encourage ejaculation.
Trained grown males are typically sold only four days out of the year in the public markets but private trading of personal breeders is allowed to make sure the population grows as much as it can.
Sophiaās friend Cassy has purchased a male that normally would fetch a Queenās ransom through one of those private transactions. Strong, masculine, fertile, with striking blue eyes and blonde hair. But thereās a problem. Heās a snarky little son of a bitch who wonāt perform on demand and seems to be able to control his erections, although heās not impotent and he wonāt take any offered aphrodisiacs Cassy gives him. Since he canāt be compelled Cassy, at her witās end calls her friend Sophia, a Male Trainer.
Obviously, Iād be playing Sophia. To get into some physical description in case any of you feel like jumping right in with the maleās pov, Sheās tall, slim, with short auburn hair and green eyes. All the man knows about her is sheās an old friend of the woman who purchased him, a male trainer, and heās met his share of trainers before.
Iām looking for a literate, snarky, nerdy pervert to write along with on this one. I imagine the character is one hell of what us BDSM folks would call a ābratā. So extra points if you have a great sense of humor and the ability to find a way to make the character subvert any expectations Sophia might have. Iād like this to be long term. Preferably on shared Google Docs or email. Guys who are writers go to the front of the line. Guys who are writers and who are switch get in front of those guys.
As far as the direction of the story, I figured we could work it out together. Does he eventually become trained? Will he tell her why heās an asshole? Does he figure out how to short circuit the belt and take out years of frustration on the trainer?
All of those sound amazingly hot to me but my favorite has to be the last one.
Kinks:dub/non con (from either m or f), bondage, teasing, oral, piv sex, rough sex, dirty talk
Limits: Toilet stuff
If youād like more detail even after reading this wall of text Iāve actually done a little bit of world building on this because Iām also an erotica writing nerd and while normally Iād write this whole thing on my own it occurred to me it might be fun to get a genuinely masculine POV. Itās so vastly different from what I normally write I donāt even know where to start with the man-view on this.
Plus, you know, Iām horny. ;)
Are you still with me? Great, get ready for another wall of text that is my idea for the first entry. It's subject to retconning, etc, but here we go...
āHow did you get him?ā I studied the male kneeling on the floor next to my friend. We were standing in the small office that was attached to my home, fading sunlight streamed through the west facing windows, causing the whole room to light up in a tones of soft creamy gold . Normally by this time of day my office would have been closed for hours and myself not seeing any clients, breeders or servants until Monday. This Friday was even worse than usual. Iād planned my stay at home vacation for the upcoming week and Iād been looking forward to a nice quiet time with my novels, net shows, and maybe my vibrator when Cassy had called. Sheād given me the rushed and confused account of how sheād finally purchased a male and he was turning out to be too difficult for her and would I please please please help and of course sheād pay me and she didnāt want to take him to just anyone and she knew I was good andā¦
Iād calmed her down and told her to bring him over.
I couldnāt get a good look at his face while he was kneeling but he was built well. Well, if I were honest he was built like some mythical god. The shape of his body under the shirt and pants he wore seemed to indicate a hyper masculine subject that normally would cost more than Cassy might see in five years and even then the council would have to clear her health for one this virile looking. It made me wonder if maybe there was something wrong with him, as there often was with men now.
There had been a market day a few weeks ago, but I had the feeling she hadnāt picked him up there. My friend had been saving for only three months for a live-in breeder and even then she wasnāt that great with holding onto cash. But he clearly belonged to her. The small wand like control in her hand that would regulate his Belt was hanging from a loop around her wrist. In the other hand she clutched his Certification Folder. It looked alarmingly thick. This male had a history.
āA friend of Greta, you remember her, she runs the local paper, contacted her wanting to run an ad for him. She knew I was looking and he was an amazing deal so she told me first. I went to see him right away and his health checks and everything were amazing. And just look at him! I had to have him.ā She bit her lip, looking at me anxiously, āBut heās got a little bit of an attitude problem and he wonāt breed me. I thought I could manage but...ā She trailed off, sighed heavily, and hefted the too full Cert Folder that would contain his biography, certificate of clean health, and his entire history up to now. Her cheeks were coloring in a blush that turned her pale skin a deep crimson. With her red curly hair it made her look a bit like a fluffy tomato.
I knew she expected me to be critical of her too quick decision making. Sheād had impulse problems as long as Iād known her, which had been since we were both five and sheād decided to spend her entire monthās allowance on a robotic kitten when she didnāt even like cats. It had just been the first shiny thing sheād seen at the toy shop where our mothers had taken us.
I studied him, kneeling down in my heels to get a good look at his face. He lifted his chin when I did and glared directly at me with eyes so blue they almost looked sapphire. His look was so defiant and sharp, it was hard to believe it was on the face of a man. He was also handsome, with the broad, yet chiseled features you normally only saw in the scandinavian lines which I thought had almost died out. I couldnāt remember the last time Iād seen a blue eyed male. It had been at least five years, since the Trainers convention in Seattle. And even then I seemed to remember only one male had blue eyes and his had been faded and washed out compared to this male.
Despite the defiant look he was still kneeling calmly enough, hands resting palms down on his thighs. Even in that relaxed position I could see how thickly muscular his limbs were, his hands looked powerful as well. There wouldnāt be a safe jar in the house with this man around.
The only outwardly visible concession to what sheād claimed about him being difficult was a collar around his throat, a rectangular box was attached, no larger than a matchbook with a small blinking green light on it. I recognized it as the type that could prevent speech. It was a cheaper model, known to only work part of the time, and Cassy likely had even gotten this second hand.
āHow old is he?ā I asked.
āUm,ā She turned the folder in her hand, flipping it open, and skimming while I continued studying the male. It was just like Cassy to not know the age of a male sheād purchased. I smiled faintly as I waited for her answer and the defiant look he was giving me changed to one of defiant puzzlement as if he were wondering why I might be amused. I dropped him a wink. If I was going to train this one it was always a good idea to try to bond early. āThirty two.ā She finally said.
I stood up, looking him over. Cassy, seeing my hesitation chimed in, āPlease, whatever you usually charge, Iāll pay it and ten percent. I can write you a check for the week. He was such a great deal that I can give you the rest of what Iāve savedā¦ā
āWhy the hurry?ā I asked, grinning a bit.
āIāve been tracking and Iāll be ovulating in ten days.ā She said.
āIf heās going to be live in youāll get plenty of chances, though.ā I said.
āYea, but I mean, heās pretty butā¦ā She bit her lip, clearly reluctant to say more. I understood. Sheād probably sell him again, if she was having too many problems with him. I wondered how often heād changed hands and sighed, holding up my hand to stop her from going on.
āIāll try.ā I said, āYou can leave him here.ā
She squealed in delight and threw her arms around me in a brief hug, then shoved the Belt control and the folder into my hands, āThank god, I have to run though. I have a date with Annabelle and I havenāt gotten anything done at the house since heās been there. The place is a disaster.ā
āOne week.ā I said, āAfter that Iām all booked.ā
āOne week.ā She nodded, still smiling her relieved smile, āThank you so much!ā
And a moment later she was slamming out of the office, leaving me to face the kneeling, glaring male whose name I hadnāt even gotten yet...
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