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Lightening flashed across the darkened sky, illuminating the tumultuous whitecaps as they crashed into the white sands of the beach. Thunder rumbled over the sound of the waves only adding to the ominous gloom. The vacation house sat just beyond the reach of the shoreline, overlooking what was normally a calm and idyllic inlet. It's screened in back porch looked out over the private beach, furnished with the typical wicker furniture you saw in the tropics.
Max sat in one of the two chairs, a cooler filled with cheap beer at his feet, looking out over the turbulent storm. His mood was as dark as the sky. This was supposed to be the perfect vacation. The one they had been planning for almost a year now. At the last moment, his wife's work had decided to fly her to New York to close a billion dollar project. She HAD to go, and it was far too late to get their deposits back on the house rental or the airplane tickets.
"Plus," she had said, "My sister is already going. I don't want her to spend a week in Mexico without someone there. You know how she can get Max." He took another sip of beer, finding solace in the bitter taste. He'd flown all the way down south, only to be caught in a sudden storm. Only think to do really was drink and wait for it to pass.
He was in his late twenties, tall and in-shape. In fact, he worked at much more now than he did when he was younger. His wife being so busy lately, Max seemed to spend more and more time at the gym. He was handsome though, his square jaw, angular english nose, and piercing blue eyes added up to a classically American good-looks. With his reddish brown hair cut short on the sides but long on top, his friends joked that he looked like Harrison Ford. "I've been called worse" he'd always jokingly respond.
From behind him he heard a click as the screen door slid open. "Hey, care if I join you?"
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For this prompt I'm looking for someone to play either my character's younger Sister-in-Law or possibly someone else who is either vacationing or lives nearby. I'm kind of imagining a slow build up on this one with lots of flirting as we build tension. We both know we shouldn't, but ultimately we give in to more primal desires and can't ignore the sexual attraction between us.
I'm open to changing characters and settings around, so let me know if you've got better ideas. Hope you enjoyed reading!
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